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蔡鸟作文,关于家长的素质请各位大侠帮忙看一下

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发表于 2005-8-1 14:24:00 | 只看该作者

蔡鸟作文,关于家长的素质请各位大侠帮忙看一下



  •   What are some of the qualities of a good parent? there may


have  some people think that a good parent must have a sense of



responsibility, on the other hand ,a few of people may suppose that an



intelligent parent are a important quality .however ,from my point



of view, i will say that a good parent must have a sense of



humor ,optimism, and  respect .my argument are listed as follow


       The essential qualities of a good parent is optimism .for



Example ,if we face some of a difficult problem, they must be brave



and not be fear them. they can help us with a right way to solve the



problem, once they show a little of  fear, we may became discouraged



soon. do you think these example quoted above is very persuasive?


       Another important qualities of a good parent is that they



must have a sense of humor. as far as i am concern ,a parent without



a sense of humor ,is like a spring without flowers, a dish without a



seasoning. there is a example that is very reasonable. if i was failed


on the test, they do not angry with me ,instead ,they use a sense of



humor, and talk with me by using a great deal of



jokes. consequently i feel better and gain a vast proportion of



confidences


      last but not least, parent have to respect us .their treat us



as friends instead of a child. they accepted our different concern



when we make some thing wrong. they do not expect us to do a difficult



condition ,they want to us to make own persons.


      form what has been above, we can safety come to the



conclusion that a good parent must have a sense of



humor, optimism, and  respect.

沙发
发表于 2005-8-1 14:45:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用dabao917在2005-8-1 14:24:00的发言:



  •   What are some of the qualities of a good parent? there may


have (是不是想用there be 句型?) some people think that a good parent must have a sense of



responsibility, on the other hand ,a few of people may suppose that an



intelligent parent are a important quality (parent are a quality?).however ,from my point



of view, i will say that a good parent must have a sense of



humor ,optimism, and  respect .my argument are listed as follow


       The essential qualities of a good parent is optimism .for



Example ,if we face some of a difficult problem, they must be brave



and not be fear them. they can help us with a right way to solve the



problem, once they show a little of  fear, we may became discouraged



soon. do you think these example quoted above is very persuasive?


       Another important qualities of a good parent is that they



must have a sense of humor. as far as i am concern ,a parent without



a sense of humor ,is like a spring without flowers, a dish without a



seasoning. there is a example that is very reasonable. if i was failed


on the test, they do not angry with me ,instead ,they use a sense of



humor, and talk with me by using a great deal of



jokes. consequently i feel better and gain a vast proportion of



confidences


      last but not least, parent have to respect us .their treat us



as friends instead of a child. they accepted our different concern



when we make some thing wrong. they do not expect us to do a difficult



condition ,they want to us to make own persons.


      form what has been above, we can safety come to the



conclusion that a good parent must have a sense of



humor, optimism, and  respect.


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