求教Olin的essay思路

freethebmw · 发表于 2015-8-19 14:32:45

题目：

Please respond to both of thefollowing required items in one uploaded document:

· In one or two sentences,please describe your immediate career plans upon graduation from Olin.

· At Olin, we prideourselves on our close-knit community and aim to know every student by name and story. In anessay of no more than 500 words, please introduce yourself as you would to yourfuture Olin classmates.

不好意思，之前题目并没有贴全。我的问题如下：1.Olin要求把career goal和introduce yourself写在一份document中，我的理解是要分别针对这两个问题单独答题对吧？并不是把两个问题揉到一篇文章中对吗？2.大家觉得我们需要把Why Olin, Why MBA在essay中写出来吗？我感觉Olin只想让我们单纯介绍自己，我的理解对么。。。

真抱歉，我都开始质疑自己的语文理解能力了，是不是我想太多了

JonFrank · 发表于 2015-8-22 22:15:22

Hello there,
YES! It would be VERY helpful for you to approach this question and tell them why YOU think YOU fit perfectly with the people of Olin. they will like you for it.

Best,
Jon

山贼的头头 · 发表于 2015-8-19 18:14:11

不要。WHY SCHOOL走题了。主要是写你自己，可以从几个方面去介绍，当然可以稍微引申到WHY SHOOL。但不能是主体。个人觉得

freethebmw · 发表于 2015-8-19 21:30:11

山贼的头头发表于 2015-8-19 18:14
不要。WHY SCHOOL走题了。主要是写你自己，可以从几个方面去介绍，当然可以稍微引申到WHY SHOOL。但不能是 ...

我也觉得应该就照着字面意思去回答学校的问题，但总觉得一所学校的essay要是连why school why mba都不回答又有点儿太不安心

freethebmw · 发表于 2015-8-20 23:22:45

自己顶！！

freethebmw · 发表于 2015-8-23 10:15:28

JonFrank 发表于 2015-8-22 22:15
Hello there,
YES! It would be VERY helpful for you to approach this question and tell them why YOU t ...

Thanks Jon!

freethebmw · 发表于 2015-8-23 12:12:12

JonFrank 发表于 2015-8-22 22:15
Hello there,
YES! It would be VERY helpful for you to approach this question and tell them why YOU t ...

Hi Jon,

I know I should describe why olin and I are perfectly match and why I fit Olin community in all dimensions, but should we also describe in this essay why we want to pursue MBA right now?

JonFrank · 发表于 2015-8-25 21:59:20

freethebmw 发表于 2015-8-23 12:12
Hi Jon,

I know I should describe why olin and I are perfectly match and why I fit Olin community ...

Hey,
They don’t ask it, so it’s not necessary.
Jon

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