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[求助]TWE027 请帮忙修改啊!多谢!!

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楼主
发表于 2005-3-17 11:08:00 | 只看该作者

[求助]TWE027 请帮忙修改啊!多谢!!

TWE 027


Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.






Almost all the people want to do what they are fond of doing, although few of them can enjoy themselves according to their willing. Especially as an adult with enough responsibility, I am extremely aware that I should do what I have to do for I am not only a natural being but also a social person. So it is obvious for me to agree such a statement that we should sometimes do things what we do not enjoy doing. At least three convinced reasons are listed as follow.





First and foremost, sometimes do what we do not enjoy enough is the requirement of making a living by us. No matter you have had any sort of study or work experience, you should go though such situation that you did a thing only because someone else wanted you to do and you had to do it well simultaneously as possible as you could. For instance, as an employee, if he dose not obey any principle in his workshop, he will be close to be claimed or even fired by his employers. Nevertheless, you can say “no” to your boss unless you really do not care your income.





Secondly, the individual development needs us to do something against our optimal wills. It is known to us all that studying something especially the complicated subjects such as math and physics make most learners feel boring and stuffy. But these are also the fundamental programs of our prospective advanced research. Nobody of us could only study arts without science, which is like we only select the meat, rejecting the vegetables as our daily meals.





In addition, during some special circumstance, it is much more benefit for you and your friends to express something for inspiring each other than to tell the truth, although such opportunities are rare. One of the previous news papers reported that a person with a severe disease came back to his life contrary to nature with only encouragement from his surroundings.





To sum up, it is such a mature representation to do what we do not enjoying doing during some particular environment. We should balance the merits and drawbacks among most of the things around us, and think more for others or even society. You will be easy to find that the more you think about and do for others, the more you would enjoy doing sooner or later.





一临近考试就饱偿搜肠刮肚之苦,唉~!~~~


实在不想让TWE成barrier啊!!救命那!~~~~~


[此贴子已经被作者于2005-3-20 23:37:09编辑过]
沙发
发表于 2005-3-18 22:32:00 | 只看该作者
個人拙見,樓主的句型可以簡化
板凳
发表于 2005-3-19 01:48:00 | 只看该作者

不知道楼主还有多久考试?

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-19 08:03:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用brace在2005-3-19 1:48:00的发言:

不知道楼主还有多久考试?



这个月30号啊,急疯了,作文还是没底哪!!!上回因为不慎取消了成绩,ETS连作文都没帮我批改啊,所以现在一眨眼又要开考了,心里一点底都没有啊。真的不想栽在讨厌的作文上,否则 这么久的心血都会白费了...请各位帮帮忙,多多指点啊!!多谢了!!!
5#
发表于 2005-3-22 12:55:00 | 只看该作者
不着急, 觉得楼主写得不错啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-23 11:30:00 | 只看该作者

多谢brace的鼓励;下周就考了,请路过的版主和各位考友多加指点啊,多谢!!


[此贴子已经被作者于2005-3-23 11:30:30编辑过]
7#
发表于 2005-3-23 23:15:00 | 只看该作者
good luck!!
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-27 11:04:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢各位鼓励,我卡好时间练习了。但总觉得30分钟太紧张了,我就是匀速的敲字,不停下来思考....也顶多顶多写350个字,修改花的时间很长,而真正考试的时候实在留不出几分钟来仔细斟酌啊.........唉!~~~·

这一篇还烦请多多指出不足,多谢! 一眨眼,就剩下最后三天了,紧张啊!~~~~~~~~~~````

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