【题】agree or disagree: students can benefit from student organization and club activities as much as from their academic studies.
*本题中侃哥Kevin《2013.10机经预测及思路解析》第23题，详情参见：戳我
题型：比较 观点：让步 角度：利弊分析
开头：同意学生参加社团活动和学业成绩一样重要。（话题引入+双方/某方观点呈现+我方观点及过度）
Since the government spares no efforts to promote “quality education” which zeros in on students’ all-around development, students nowadays no longer remain academics-centered or exam-oriented, instead, they are exposed to various students organizations and club activities. This transformation divides onlookers into two basic camps with opposite views: some people are in favor of the previous system while others support the recent change. Personally, I am a big fan of “quality education” and I am totally in agreement with students’ participation in extra-curricular activities. My reasons are as follows. （88字）
中间段1：学生组织和社团活动能锻炼到学术能力以外的重要能力。（主题句+解释+细节扩展）
Firstly, students partaking organizations or club activities can develop some non-academic capabilities such as leadership, communication or execution, which are crucial for the future. It is because no matter what kind of student organization or club itis, the goal is always to achieve something with the cooperation of all members.During the process, there must be leaders who organize activities, give orders or assign workloads and members who should communicate with each other timelyto ensure that everything goes smoothly. I remember I used to be the leader of an English speaking society in college and I successfully organized several large-scale speaking contests. The capability accumulating through thoseactivities laid a foundation for my future work.（117字）
中间段2： 在这些俱乐部和学生组织中，我们能找到志同道合的朋友，这是快乐的源泉。（主题句+解释+细节扩展）
In addition, student organizations and clubs are places where we can make great friends and it spices up tedious campus life. A certain type of student organization or clubis like a group or circle that appeals to people with similar hobbies orinterests, and that is the reason why one can find his or her congenial friends in the club more often that not. For example, people who love taking photos will join the photography club, and movie-goers are always take part in moviesalons and exchange mutual ideas and thoughts on the same movie. Undoubtedly, being together with people having the shared aspirations and enthusiasm is the source of happiness. （112字）
让步：学术学习也是很重要的，让我们系统掌握专业知识。但是不能因为学业就放弃参加社团活动，否则就成为geek or nerd，智商很高但缺乏情商。（承认第二个点也有好处/坏处+对其进行打压、削弱）
Admittedly, academic study is of vital importance to every student for it provides basic andsystemic knowledge to which we cannot be blind. However, the importance ofacademic study does not mean student organization and club activities are dispensable. One who devotes himself to academic study without paying any attention toextra-curricular activities stands a fair chance to become a nerd with high IQ but low EQ and that case is not an ideal one. （75字）
结尾：重申观点+升华主题
In a nutshell, I regard student organization and club activity as important as academic study. As an old saying goes, “all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”, if you do notwant to be dull, then go to join an organization or a club immediately, because in there, you will harvest unexpected treasures.（56字）
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发表于 2013-10-28 00:42:22
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