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rosy_victory · 发表于 2013-10-20 22:45:14

OG-13 SC 29. Emily Dichinson's letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyon else.
A. Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumbering
B. Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan's mariage to Emily's brother and ended shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumber
C. Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's mariage to Emily's brother and that ends shortly before Emily's death in 1886 and outnumbering
D. Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's mariage to Emily's brother, ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, and outnumbering
E. Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's mariage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumber

其中，A的表达确实比较wordy，但是感觉还是比较公正的，而outnumbering的表达为什么不能理解为是前面的伴随，而是说是outnumbering是unclearly refers to 的呢？请帮忙看看。谢谢。

Indigolove · 发表于 2013-10-20 23:02:00

Emily Dichinson's letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

A. Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumbering
B. Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan's mariage to Emily's brother and ended shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumber
C. Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's mariage to Emily's brother and that ends shortly before Emily's death in 1886 and outnumbering
D. Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's mariage to Emily's brother, ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, and outnumbering
E. Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's mariage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumber

In C,D : Actually, the two sentences have no verb, so elinimate them.....
So in Choice B and E

But Choice B has two verbs, so elinimate....
Actually B is Emily Dichinson's letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were..................,outnumber.................

We go with E, E is perfect, because Emily Dichinson's letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson, (.................), outnumber her letters.................

rosy_victory · 发表于 2013-10-20 23:02:04

请牛牛们指点一二

rosy_victory · 发表于 2013-10-20 23:24:14

但是A中，letters were written ……应该是不缺verb的呀，CD是可以这样排出的。而且确实B是两个verb，但前面和A是一样的，所以可以看出A是不缺verb的。 outnumbering形式为什么不可以是伴随呢？谢谢。

rosy_victory · 发表于 2013-10-21 09:30:43

还有同学能帮忙看下A选项吗？感谢上面同学的积极回答~~~考试过7！

q2621109 · 发表于 2013-11-14 23:38:31

A选项的重心变了，原句突出的事outnumber而不是书写信件，所以不能将后句理解为伴随……

haiyueqinhui · 发表于 2013-11-15 09:51:26

我承认A的确很诱人，但因为现在分词是修饰前句的，表伴随或者结果，是有联系的
而本句中outnumber 跟 letters were written over a period 没有逻辑关系，所以不能选A

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