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新人,求批改作文一篇,考试临近,慌!

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发表于 2013-8-20 10:33:16 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
一篇寂静作文,8.25考,作文很着急,每人批改很心痛啊。。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who have learned many different skills are more likely to succeed than those who focus on learning only one skill.
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Everyone has his or her position in this society, and extraordinary abilities or skills can help them sustain themselves to live a comfortable lives. There are many discussions related to skill, to possess multiple skills or concentrate on only one skill, deserve to be paied attention. Some people claim that it is more likely to be successful for those who just focusing on one skill. While I stand on the other side, for that success is not something accidental, it only accessed by those skillful people who cannot be replaced easily.

One skill is not enough to be successful, even though one can do the best. Current society is different from before, the competitions of limited positions among many people are becoming more and more fierce, you may have a ray of hope to be the one in a million. However, to be a leader or take a vital occupation, you should know much more than your job, at least be familiar with your team members' work. Thus, you can coordinate your subordinates to work together, making the biggest benefits. Even if a leader may be not as excellent as each of the employees in their fields, the all-round skills will make him or her so unusual that he or she can take over all the works or guide everyone in the best way with everything is taken into consideration. As I just said, to be irreplaceable with many different skills rather than do a common job is easy to succeed.

Concentration is the guarantee to make achievements. Some people may believe so, as the famous example, Da Vinci, he had been painting eggs for a long time before he was well-known, he drew in different shapes, from different directions. Absorbed in painting really made him a skillful painter. Also, Marx, who spent 40 years on his famous book Capital, was also considered as a person focused on his philosophy for all his life. In fact, what most people usually ignore is that Da Vinci showed his talent skills in many other areas. He had many inventions and contributed to engineering, medicine, archaeology and so on. It is his various skills helped him stand out. Marx, likewise, mastered more than six languages which gave him a wider space to study and develop his philosophy. I think, without their different skills, they, or whoever, cannot make a great achievement.

Nevertheless, if one just touch the superficiality, it useless no matter how many skills a person master. Time and energy do not permit us spend much time on something meaningless. Different skills could equip us with access to success, leave us more competitive, while it is based on one proficient skill that can support your living at least.

In conclusion, I deeply agree that diversified skills are more helpful for us to become successful, because we will have more opportunities, more choices, more means to make a living. However, whether you can be a outstanding person depend on your hard works and
clear destination.
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