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It is better for children to grow up in the countrysidethan in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examplesto develop your essay.
Have you ever jumped into a river to catchfish in the summer? Have you ever competed climbing trees with your littlefriends? Have you run in the wheat field with your dog? If you have never hadthese experiences, you would never know what an unforgettable time it is tospend your childhood in countryside. Nothing is better than growing up freelyin the countryside in benefiting a man’s life. The company of many peerfriends, the various kinds of outdoor games and large amount of time to learnwhatever you want all account for the benefits that the life in countryside couldbring to a child.
In the first place, constantly spending timewith a group of people of similar ages could strengthen the communicationskills and good personality, which are bound to affect the quality of life and thelevel of happiness in a person’s entire life. When I was a child, my parentssent me to my grandpa’s every summer. The children of my age in the town askedme to join them. We made plans together to catch fish in the river, buildminiature houses for our toys and so on. In this kind of corporation I learnedhow to express myself and respect others’ views, which indeed helped me win themonitor election in my college. On the contrary, in city life most childrenhave to stay alone in the spare time because their parents are busy and theyare not allowed to play outside for the safety’s concern.
Another crucial advantage of living in countrysideis that thanks to the frequent outdoor games, children in countryside areinclined to be healthier than those in big city. A physical research hasrevealed that the more bacteria children are exposed to, the stronger theirimmune system is. Obviously the environment in city is much cleaner than thatof countryside, but it is not good but harm to children’s immunity to preventdiseases.
Furthermore, living in the countryside gives childrena plenty of free time to learn whatever interests them, which assists childrento find the field that they are initially good at. My cousin is brought up inBeijing, the capital of China. Her spare time is filled up with dance class,painting class and piano class. She always complained to me how boring theclasses were and how annoyed she was because she didn’t want to learn those atall. What if she spends the time doing things that she thinks interesting? Thiscase is not rare in the life of city children. Being pushed to learn is farless efficient than learning with passion.
Admittedly, city life enables children tohave expanded horizon and access to new technology. But its disadvantages outweighthe advantages. Owning free time, frequent outdoor sports and a group ofplaymates turns a person’s childhood into the most valuable time in his or herlife.
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