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我练习的是TPO19的独立作文
题目是:In order to bewell-informed, people must get information from many different news resources

我的三个论点是:
1.读这么多的信息浪费了大量的时候却没有得到什么实际的效果
2.像interpersonal relationship之类的不光光是从news resoueces得到,更重要的是来源与我们的日常生活。
3.只是读而没有做到自我反思并不有助于只是层面的提高

这是我第一次好好练手的文章,希望大家能指出来有什么不足,谢谢><~

article:
Nowadays, with the development of various technology, the advent of age of information appears. However, the majority of us traps into a misleading situation: Getting information from different news sources is able to broaden our horizons and make us well-informed. From my perspective, this phenomenon has potential risks.

First and foremost, it takes us a large amount of time to read but literally has not any effect at all. Admittedl,we are obliged to absorb more knowledge from different news sources to equip ourselves. However, as the matter  of fact, events on a news source are basically analogue to another news source. What is worse,I hold the view that we ought to explore knowledge one by one, little by little.
Covered up by overwhelming news, we are merely skipping them rather than understanding them. Take myself as an example, I am passionate about being regarded as a wellinformed adolescent, nevertheless, when it comes to read
information, I rarely concentrate more on what I am fascinated by just like recreation and sports news. Although Itry my best to engage myself into looking through news from other fields, I skip them and just after a short whileI distract from that.
Moreover, assorted skills, which are not able to be learned from news sources, mostly originate from nature, from our everyday life. For example, Mark Zuckberg gained his reputation for the genius social work. It is admitted
that he is well equipped by computer information. Despite the fact that he focus on news about the improvement of Computer Science and Technology, the idea of creating Facebook comes from his tricks and knowledge of relevant
scientific field obtained from his colleagues and from his daily interpersonal relationship with other peers.
Therefore knowledge exists every corner of the world not just merely news sources.

Ultimately, without selfexamination after obtaining knowledge, we are the slaves of the explosion of information
rather than the master of information. Confucius, a greatest philosopher, investigated a variety of noted books and concluded his own ideas which profoundly influenced the whole thought and life of Chinese. Only by self-examination can we have the internal motive to utilize those precious information.
In a nutshell, I stand the opposite side of statement and extremely argue that everybody is obliged to realize
what is the accurate step for them to be well-in formed.


再次谢过!~
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