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issue 9,求痛批啊,感觉写的跟。。一样啊。。。

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发表于 2013-6-3 21:21:29 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
N9.In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
[Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.]

The past several decades has witnessed the meteoric development of every aspect of the world. After a long period of accumulating, quantities of breakthroughs in many field have been made, playing different important roles in our society. Based on the fact that these fantastic accomplishments , people tend to draw the conclusion that not being strongly influenced by the past achievements, one in any area cannot make a significant contribution. As for me, although there are flaws about it, I agree with this assertion.
First point to justify this statement that there is nearly no possibility for people who do not draw on the existing achievements to contribute to this field significantly is that as the world progresses, numerous knowledge derived from new discoveries are added to existing subjects. That is, almost every subject bases itself on the past accomplishments, which lay the foundation for specific respect of the society. In order to make a significant contribution in particular field, one must be familiar with its basic rules and laws because only when people keep in mind how it works can they refine past theories and make novel breakthroughs. Without these knowledge, it will be unrealistic for the majority of the mass to complete an unprecedented task due to the limited ability and energy.
In addition, it is the combination of realistic ideas and effective methods that make a significant contribution in any area. Being effected by the past achievements first is conducive to the formation of one's logic thought and basic skills that are of great necessity on the way to make contributions. Both help people reduce useless efforts and provide us with the ability to transform fantastic ideas originating from imagination into real great accomplishments. Studying past achievements is the most effective way to mastering these skills. Without the impacts of past breakthroughs on people, it is less likely for them to gain these valuable  experience by themselves in a short period, thus impossible to make a significant contribution.
Admittedly,  being influenced by the past means that people may be trapped in the existing laws and limits their imagination. Once accepting the prevailing theories, individuals tend to take certain things of great value for granted and even do not attempt to try new ideas that seems unrealistic. However, gaining the basic knowledge, n most cases, helps people to have a clear analytical mind and distinguish the real worthy dreams and the idealistic ones. What is more, with these  experience, people are more likely to creative because it can inspire their imagination. Only a slight hint from these knowledge may lead to an amazing discovery.
In conclusion, in every field of endeavor, it is impossible to make significant contributions without being strongly affected by achievements of the past at first in that field because of the knowledge, experience and thought they bring to people, all of which are indispensable on the way to succeed in making a breakthrough. It may limit their imagination , but the inspiration they give to us reduce this flaw to certain extent.
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沙发
发表于 2013-6-4 00:15:13 | 只看该作者

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发表于 2013-6-5 14:17:58 | 只看该作者

我请人看了下,因为我改的时候,对你的句子虽然读起来很难受,但又不知道怎么改

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 楼主| 发表于 2013-6-8 11:05:20 | 只看该作者
竹林中人 发表于 2013-6-5 14:17
我请人看了下,因为我改的时候,对你的句子虽然读起来很难受,但又不知道怎么改
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这个回复没有提醒啊,实验中间瞅一眼才看到了。。。
谢谢斑竹了,意见很中肯啊,我一直都有点儿依赖语法的毛病。谢谢斑竹啊,以后我还得多注意这方面的问题。
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