求NN指导什么是Run-on sentence！（prep08 189）

Hugateddybear · 发表于 2013-4-26 15:00:03

189. (OG12-123)
She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.

文中红色是划线部分，被判错。这里的原因是run-on。但我不解的是she was...是和photographer... run-on还是和her photographs...run-on？
prep笔记中说：“S+V1+O1, and pronoun(指代S)+V2+O2. 此时如果代词指代的不是S则不行”那这里的she was和her photographs算这种情况吗？

run-on连写句一直很纠结！！！求NN指导一下，万分感谢！！！！！
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Hugateddybear · 发表于 2013-4-29 17:51:53

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Hugateddybear · 发表于 2013-5-1 15:07:00

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Hugateddybear · 发表于 2013-5-2 09:06:20

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kiwifoodtown · 发表于 2013-5-2 10:23:10

She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, run-on。

Hugateddybear · 发表于 2013-5-3 09:51:58

kiwifoodtown 发表于 2013-5-2 10:23
She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photogra ...

谢谢KIWI 明白了这个

renita12 · 发表于 2013-5-3 10:40:30

就是两句子间没有连词吧

求NN指导什么是Run-on sentence！（prep08 189）

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