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lissa的作文帖,比较笨,今天有作文修改么?

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发表于 2013-3-7 10:11:18 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
弱弱的问一下,在贴吧上看今天的题目是Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job and work long hours for three days in a week than to work shorter hours for five days in a week.

是不是得先发帖占个座,然后10点前上交作文?
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-3-7 15:22:09 | 只看该作者
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In my opinion, I disagree with the idea of working long hours for three days in a week than to work shorter hours for five days in a week. I think everyone should have enough entertainment time a day. If we cost much time on single work a day. That will make the normal people crazy.
Sometimes we are critical of outselves.but that is not a health way. In modern society, most of the diseases cause by too hard and focus on the busy work so ignoring to have a rest. If we work for a long time, we will feel that good in the night. Those easily destroy our bodies as time passes.
As we all known, using computer dealing with business is general.So, in these days. A person whom sitting the chair and staring the screen last 8 hours is ordinary. I have the same experience. I felt so tied about every, I wound sick if do go on working.
So, we should have a good life style. Keeping a healthy way can make you more enjoyable. Neither working for a long time, nor having a break suddenly. If we have a plan about it, everything will be fine. I feel work long hours for three days in a week than to work shorter hours for five days is a wrong way, and that it can bring only further misfortune.
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发表于 2013-3-14 08:39:22 | 只看该作者
需要占座的说
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