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Boyce1995 · 发表于 2012-10-31 11:32:51

The government andcorporation should share all their scientific discoveries with other countriesin the world?

Observing thepresent-day world, scientists increasingly discoveries new invention that canenhance our life-quality such as lights, cell phone and computer. However,there is a claim arises. Some people argue that government and corporationshould share all their scientific discoveries with other countries in the worldin order to all of the country progress. I, after careful contemplation,disagree with this opinion. Because of, these new discoveries have unstableelements it might take some negative influence in our life.

To begin with,sharing new invention has negative influence because it cannot sure that it ismature discoveries. It is widely known that a new invention need repeated agreat number of times and need long-term test. Consequently, if human just wantto develop scientific and ignores scientific of regular it will take moredisadvantages far outweigh benefit. For example, clone technology, even ifclone technology can protect rare animal, if some of countries use thistechnology to clone people it will bring human of panic. Therefore, we shouldnot share all of discovery while we only know it beneficial.

What’s more, thenew invention usually can bring a great number of benefits. Nevertheless,sharing all of discoveries will have disadvantage for government andcorporation to gains more financial income. In addition, a country andcorporation spent both time and money to invent new goods, and then othercountry and corporation enjoying it bring about benefit. At the meantime, theycannot pay any energy to it. I believe that it is extremely unfair. It will notonly damage the benefit of those countries, but also it will decrease people intenseprogress of desire.

In addition, eventhough all of country can progressive via sharing all of discoveries, it isinevitable that between a country with another always have competitive. Takemilitary for example, sharing military technologies, when countries haveconflict with others, advanced military will take more disaster. Thereby, insome of sensitive yield, we are not supposed to share with others.

To sum up, all the availableevidence points the fact that sharing all of discoveries has disadvantages faroutweigh than benefit. For instance, sharing military technologies will bringmore serious disaster, sharing advanced technologies will damage thosecountries benefit.

Boyce1995 · 发表于 2012-10-31 11:35:08

It is more important to choose friends that have fun with than to choose friends that will help you when you need them.

Observing the present-day world, if people want to have stable stand in this world, we could not live without friends who can bring fun or help us. At that time, society appears a question that whether we should select friends for fun or the ones who can assist us to overcome difficult. I, after careful contemplation, tend to make friends who can bring fun in my life as I am student who always stay at school and tolerance the extremely dull school life. Consequently, I would like making fiends who have fun with me to increase color of life.

To begin with, friends who have more fun can occasionally speak a joke or topic to ease the tension. It is widely known that the high students have to focus totally time and energy on academic studying in China. Therefore, students always suffer heavy pressure from study. However, a fun of friends will might easily break the ice and start a nice conversation. In this way we can get both physically and mentally relaxing. For instance, I have to pay increasing attention to study and we always feel tired. However, one of friend always speak joke to me during the rest time. It altogether makes our getting relaxing. From this case, for people, especially students, selecting a friend who has fun is better than choosing friends who can help you.

What’s more, I consider that it is difficult that seek happy in this modern society and it is of great importance for people to have fun in life. The majority of people who have wealth spend vast time and abundance money to seek happy. But, why they cannot find it? I believe that real fun is that people have modest money but have several friends who have fun that are must. In addition, the fun of friends plays a crucial role in our life because friends pay sincere heart facing up to us and increasing color of our life. Meanwhile, that could not replace by entertainment equipment.

Furthermore, making friends who always help us has disadvantages in cultivating our ability of independent. In fact, if we always depend on another people helping us to overcome difficult. It could not essential assist us, and friends cannot offer help to us anytime because friends have their own things to resolve. Thereby, having a fun of friends has benefit far outweighed than having friends who can help us.

To sum up, friends who have fun with us are a light in our boring life, they can help us to recover from depress or tire. Nevertheless, friends can help us when we need, which have disadvantages for us.

Boyce1995 · 发表于 2012-10-31 11:35:43

求大哥哥，大姐姐。。大师们。。。批改。。。。。

小的真心想学英语。

Boyce1995 · 发表于 2012-10-31 12:33:24

大哥们，，，不能就这样沉了啊。。。。求拍砖～～～～～～

Boyce1995 · 发表于 2012-10-31 22:37:41

求不沉，，求大家狠狠的拍砖。

快要考试了，，第一次发作文，，，语法巨查，求帮助，求拍砖。。

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