Found throughout Central and South America, sloths hang from trees by long rubbery limbs and sleep 15 hours a day, moving infrequently enough that two species of algae grow on its coat and between its toes. (A) sloths hang from trees by long rubbery limbs and sleep 15 hours a day, moving infrequently enough (B) sloths hang from trees by long rubbery limbs, they sleep 15 hours a day, and with such infrequent movements (C) sloths use their long rubbery limbs to hang from trees, sleep 15 hours a day, and move so infrequently (D) the sloth hangs from trees by its long rubbery limbs, sleeping 15 hours a day and moving so infrequently (E) the sloth hangs from trees by its long rubbery limbs, sleeps 15 hours a day, and it moves infrequently enough 为什么选D我已经明白了，但是看了manhattan关于“逗号”的讲解后，关于这题我有一个疑问，就是关于三个动词的疑问，要怎么平行？manhattan中讲到，如果俩动词是一个主语发出的，就不能用逗号，举个小白的例子： Wrong: He ate an apple, and went to school. Right: He ate an apple and went to school. Right:He ate an apple, and she went to school. 而且逗号不能连接两个完整的句子，比如： Wrong:He ate an apple, he went to school. 问题就来了，如果三个动词，要怎么平行呢？就比如把E做个小改动： Found throughout Central and South America, the sloth hangs from trees by its long rubbery limbs, sleeps 15 hours a day, and it moves so infrequently that two species of algae grow on its coat and between its toes. og解释说 hangs......,sleeps......,and it moves......不平行。那要怎么修改才能正确呢？ 纠结啊，今天都睡不好了。。。
其实这里不用判断动词平行来选择，我觉得这三个动词平行也未必是错，但可以根据其它方面来判断。 A 中enough that 错误 B 除了run-on ，还有its 和sloths 单复数错误 C its 和their单复数不符 D暂时没有语法错误 E it 多余还有就是A中enough that 错误 所以综合起来只有D对 但是如果D 改为the sloth hangs from trees by its long rubbery limbs, sleeps 15 hours a day and moves so infrequently 我看也未必错。
其实这里不用判断动词平行来选择，我觉得这三个动词平行也未必是错，但可以根据其它方面来判断。 A 中enough that 错误 B 除了run-on ，还有its 和sloths 单复数错误 C its 和their单复数不符 D暂时没有语法错误 E it 多余还有就是A中enough that 错误 所以综合起来只有D对 但是如果D 改为the sloth hangs from trees by its long rubbery limbs, sleeps 15 hours a day and moves so infrequently 我看也未必错。
-- by 会员 wyw1018 (2012/10/29 1:28:16)
谢谢你的答复哦~ 就是想知道三个动词平行的结构是啥样的~~~ 在别的帖子里看到： hangs.....，sleeps......，and moves hangs.....and sleeps....，and it moves 这俩结构我觉得符合我之前提到的逗号使用方法，大家说这两种写法对嘛？
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