个人对issue和argument的一点感想，和大家分享一下，希望指点！！！

a319731 · 发表于 2012-10-17 18:32:01

本人11月3号G，也在玩命准备- -（前期没有乖乖背红包），在准备G期间去北京新东方上过强化班，再加上自己的准备，有些小小的感悟，不过也只是描一个outline，还希望大家多多指教！

issue：通过仔细阅读OG和北美范文的高分文章不难看出，issue并不要求作者有过多华丽的句式和高级词汇，但是看重逻辑的严密性以及用词的准确性。举一个小小的例子，看到一个比较好的比喻，cast doubt on the presumption，这里面cast我就有一种特别形象的感觉。相对于过多华丽的辞藻和句式（- -一部分原因也是自己现在的能力写不出。。），我觉得一者是文章整体结构的把握，逻辑性上要注重批判性思维，just like the two sides of coin（老话了。。），事物的两面性都值得我们去深思；二者是一些小词的运用，具体还是要靠多多读一些优秀的文章积累（现在有点来不及了T T）在这两方面上下功夫应该能够取得比较好的成绩；
argument：这个是我今天逛CD慢慢总结出来的，因为在新东方老师并不太重视（回来才发现自己如此不会挑刺- -），所以当时没怎么准备，现在才意识到A的确也有其特别的抓分点和高压线。在我看来，argument一者是要有一种acumen of ambiguous expression，抓住一个就一顿狂捶（这个需要大家背一些句式，不过要学会怎样去改变语态结构什么被动倒装伴随状语blabla。。），特别注意的是，自己要有一个大致的模板，虽然不能说是通用性的，不过我个人感觉（3号是第一次上考场，没实战经验- -），当你在考场上先piapiapia模板打上去，瞬间200—300的字呈现在眼前，心情肯定瞬间平静很多（旁边同学估计会惊悚一小会- -），然后再根据实际需求删删减减，因为argument相对于issue更“规范”，所以这一点可以被很好利用，从而减少考试时候的焦虑心态（PS：我第一次做模考，issue还能写点，因为平时自己着重看了些，但是argument当时没有准备什么模板，上去直接写的话，看着那段文字能挑出错，但是手就是下不去。。然后后面的V也受到影响了）。

最后做个小结吧：
I：注重结构，批判性思维，小词的运用恰当；
A：事先准备模板（individual），平时要对题库的花时间扣扣，争取上去就认出来是那个。。上去先巴拉巴拉打点，平静心态后慢慢改善文章。

以上是小弟的一点点感悟，还请大神指教，另外还有个问题要请问各位高手：
我原先比较多的是去背一些散文（youth, three years to see那些），由于文章语句和issue完全不是一种逻辑风格的，我想请问这样的散文风格能否运用到issue里面？比如支持某一观点，后面以排比句方式列举三个例子（当然每个例子都会用一两句话来说明这个例子与主题的共同点），然后这段最后做一个总结，这样会不会在逻辑结构上稍微差些？求指点！！！！

竹林中人 · 发表于 2012-10-17 20:00:22

AW可以算是准学术性写作吧，建议还是逻辑性强些，不要太多文采。

a319731 · 发表于 2012-10-17 21:55:45

AW可以算是准学术性写作吧，建议还是逻辑性强些，不要太多文采。

-- by 会员竹林中人 (2012/10/17 20:00:22)

麻烦中人，可不可以帮我看下这篇文章（93的那篇），当时老师给的评价很高（但是真心不晓得他有没有很仔细看- -），但总觉得有点虚。。

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the content behind appearance endowed with the marrow of immortality, which does not decay or fall into oblivion. if socrates, the famous ancient philosopher, had devoted his whole life to the misery of mundane appearance instead of seeking the infinite treasure of philosopy, he would never have the chance to cultivate his disciple Platon, never left the world profound thoughts.If Martin Luther King, the outstanding African-American Civil Right Movement leader, worried about the assaults or mockeries he may confront because of the color of his skin, he would nver have the chance to give the impressive lecture in front of Lincoln Memorial in Washington D.C. If Barbara McClintock, the lengendary scientist of 20th century, laborately dressed up herself to alleviate the discrimination of bias, she would never found the magical gene transosons within maize, never give the world a stun on the stage of the awarding of Norbel Prize. without their nourishing a keen heart, the world would be trapped even fell into unfathomable abyss.
however, as the appearing process an indispensible position, it cannot be treated neglectfully. an appropiate dress reflects the accomplishment and elegant taste within the people, which may indicate the potential for inestimable achievement. wearing fitness clothing, Napolon Hill succcessfully acuqired the credit of book productor, published his first commentary and earned him the first pot of gold. learned how to appear property may open you the gate to accomplishment.
just like Socrates said, time is of no great accounting but to dispel illusions and leave essences. rosy cheeks may decay, but the pure spirit would never evanesce. thus, while we fostering an ideal appearance, cultivating an immortal content is the eclectic method to pave a complanate road to Rome.

不知道这篇能达到怎样的水平，我写完也改了很多次，请多多指点！！

a319731 · 发表于 2012-10-18 07:42:37

球拍啊~~大家请都给点意见，我不确定这种风格是否适用issue- -

个人对issue和argument的一点感想，和大家分享一下，希望指点！！！

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