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发表于 2012-10-11 16:11:19 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
30MIN依然很遥远

59 Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.

Indeed, a primary purpose of researches is to benefit people's lives and promote the development of the society. However, I do not agree with the statement that researchers should just focus on the areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people. Three reasons are stated as follows.

To begin with, we would never know the power of a research until the result of it could be utilized by most people. Every research has a lot of complicate processes so that the achievements of them are largely uncertain. Looking back to the history, there were a large number of researches aimed at altering the world but finally failed, while there were also a variety of researches obtained great success in accident. The discovery of penicillin is a great example for the accidentally successful research. At first, Dr. Fleming never expected to operate a research to find the penicillin but merely put the unwashed instruments together. When he came back from a vacation, he discovered the penicillin, which ended an era that infectious disease almost untreatable. Clearly, Dr. Fleming did not pay too much attention to the area that could be beneficial to the greatest number of people, and he even did not realize the meaning of the research originally. It is just the inborn curiosity that impelled him to take a look at the unknown substance. Eventually the accidental discovery turned out to be one of the greatest achievements in the last century.

Even though the achievement of a research is predictable and should be beneficial to most people, it is paradox but also quite possible that the achievement could also threaten people's lives or our living environment. For example, the nuclear power, which is regarded as the savior of energy shortage, could also destroy the world. On the one hand, it is said that whichever way you look at it, nuclear power is the energy of the future. Especially when it comes to generate electricity, there is no other energy could as efficiency and environmental friendly as the nuclear power. On the other hand, we cannot deny that it is also the most dangerous energy if we are unable to utilize it properly, since an accident of the nuclear power station would engender a major catastrophe, let along the governments use it to produce nuclear weapons. Therefore, even though everyone knows the important significance of nuclear power, whether we should develop more research about the energy is still controversial.

In addition, for many scientists and researchers, personal interests might be one essential issue for them to choose their subjects. As it is said that interest is the best teacher. If scientists are compelled to study some useful research but not their interest, it is very likely that the progress of the research will be extremely slow as the result of the reduction of their initiative. Besides, the areas that could benefit most people are definitely the minority, if the researchers all concentrate on theses confined area, the contemporary social problem would be solved soon. But in the long term it will impede the stable development of the society in the future. After all there are a lot of researches that might seem groundless at present but will become helpful in future, such as the alternating current, which was regarded as a useless invention in the past turned out to be an indispensible part of people’s everyday life today.

In conclusion, according to the reasons mentioned above, limiting the range of study within the defined areas is totally inadvisable. Actually it is essential for the scientists and researchers to maintain the diversity of their researches, not only because of the uncertainty of the researches, but also as a respect to the scientists’ personal interests.
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-11 16:13:49 | 只看该作者
34) The vice president of human resources at Climpson Industries sent the following recommendation to the company's president.
In an effort to improve our employees' productivity, we should implement electronic monitoring of employees' Internet use from their workstations. Employees who use the Internet from their workstations need to be identified and punished if we are to reduce the number of work hours spent on personal or recreational activities, such as shopping or playing games. By installing software to detect employees' Internet use on company computers, we can prevent employees from wasting time, foster a better work ethic at Climpson, and improve our overall profits.



In this recommendation, the vice president of human resources proposes the Climpson to install software to detect employees' Internet usage on company computers to increase the employees' working efficiency and improve profits. The argument seems reasonable at first glance, but when we take a close look, it is actually rife with holes and based on untenable premise.

First of all, we do not know the working situation of the employees, thus it is arbitrary to assume that they would use the Internet to spend time on personal or recreational activities in work hours. If none of the employee at Climpson use the Internet for personal issues, and all of them are working at a high efficiency, installing the software might not only be useless and wasteless but also engender the employees' antipathy against the company, because they might feel be offended and distrusted. In this circumstance, it is quite possible that the working efficiency of the company would decrease by installing the software. Thus it is necessary for the president to carry on a thorough understanding of the employees' usage of Internet in working hours.

In the second place, granted that using the Internet for personal issues is really exist, the president fails to provide the prize of the software, thus we could not evaluate whether the company have enough funding for it. Actually, it is very likely that the prize of the software is as much as thousands of dollars, which is much higher than the loss bring by a few derelict employees, than buying such a software to detect them is obviously worthless. Besides, the effect and impact of installing the software is also open to doubt. As we all know that computers have a limited internal shortage, if the software would have negative influence on the operating of the computers, or sometimes might attract virus to attach the computer system, the lost will be incalculable.

In addition, even though the evidence turns out to support the president’s forgoing argument, the improvement of the overall profits is unwarranted. The profit of a company is related to multiple aspects, ranging from the international economic situation to the quality of products or service of the company. It is reasonable to doubt that despite all of the employees abide by the highest work ethic and never waste a minute of working hours, the downturn of the whole industry or a wrong decisions made by the leaders would also lead a downward trend to the company’s profits. Therefore, without considering these possibilities, the president cannot hastily cite the conclusion.

Clearly, the argument of the recommendation is based on invalid assumptions and unsound evidence, both of which are not sufficient to support the president’s proposal, and even the necessary of advocating the proposal is also in question. In order to cite the conclusion better, the president should provide more specific information of the employees and the software, and take every possible consideration into account.
板凳
发表于 2012-10-11 23:42:38 | 只看该作者
写得不错,致敬!!!
地板
发表于 2012-10-12 16:27:13 | 只看该作者
30MIN依然很遥远

59 Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.

Indeed, a primary purpose of researches is to benefit people's lives and promote the development of the society. However, I do not agree with the statement that researchers should just focus on the areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people. Three reasons are stated as follows.

To begin with, we would never know the power of a research until the result of it could be utilized by most people. Every research has a lot of complicate processes so that the achievements of them are largely uncertain. Looking back to the history, there were a large number of researches aimed at altering the world but finally failed, while there were also a variety of researches obtained great success in accident. The discovery of penicillin is a great example for the accidentally successful research. At first, Dr. Fleming never expected to operate a research to find the penicillin but merely put the unwashed instruments together. When he came back from a vacation, he discovered the penicillin, which ended an era that infectious disease almost untreatable. Clearly, Dr. Fleming did not pay too much attention to the area that could be beneficial to the greatest number of people, and he even did not realize the meaning of the research originally. It is just the inborn curiosity that impelled him to take a look at the unknown substance. Eventually the accidental discovery turned out to be one of the greatest achievements in the last century.

Even though the achievement of a research is predictable and should be beneficial to most people, it is paradox but also quite possible that the achievement could also threaten people's lives or our living environment. For example, the nuclear power, which is regarded as the savior of energy shortage, could also destroy the world. On the one hand, it is said that whichever way you look at it, nuclear power is the energy of the future. Especially when it comes to generate electricity, there is no other energy could as efficiency and environmental friendly as the nuclear power. On the other hand, we cannot deny that it is also the most dangerous energy if we are unable to utilize it properly, since an accident of the nuclear power station would engender a major catastrophe, let along the governments use it to produce nuclear weapons. Therefore, even though everyone knows the important significance of nuclear power, whether we should develop more research about the energy is still controversial.

In addition, for many scientists and researchers, personal interests might be one essential issue for them to choose their subjects. As it is said that interest is the best teacher. If scientists are compelled to study some useful research but not their interest, it is very likely that the progress of the research will be extremely slow as the result of the reduction of their initiative. Besides, the areas that could benefit most people are definitely the minority, if the researchers all concentrate on theses confined area, the contemporary social problem would be solved soon. But in the long term it will impede the stable development of the society in the future. After all there are a lot of researches that might seem groundless at present but will become helpful in future, such as the alternating current, which was regarded as a useless invention in the past turned out to be an indispensible part of people’s everyday life today.

In conclusion, according to the reasons mentioned above, limiting the range of study within the defined areas is totally inadvisable. Actually it is essential for the scientists and researchers to maintain the diversity of their researches, not only because of the uncertainty of the researches, but also as a respect to the scientists’ personal interests.
-- by 会员 llshruby (2012/10/11 16:11:19)

很好,继续加油,you can do it!
5#
发表于 2012-10-12 17:00:06 | 只看该作者
第二篇: prize of the software,应该是price。加油,很好
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-12 18:15:10 | 只看该作者
谢谢竹林!!
现在基本各类都写一遍了
我打算把写过的文章都看两遍巩固一下再写写看能不能控制30分钟
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