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[issue] 第三篇issue 求狠拍 但愿有长进

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发表于 2012-9-10 23:50:11 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
TOPIC: ISSUE36 - "The greatness ofindividuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by theircontemporaries."
WORDS: 460          TIME: 00:40:00          DATE: 2012/9/10 23:33:46

Every single individual would benefit fromknowing some lessons from the history in the past years, concerning the successand failure of the historical events and figures contributes to the developmentof the cognition of the history and facilitates the progress of the society.When it comes to the issue of the criteria of greatness of some people inhistory, or furthermore, who is the most appropriate to determine whether thosepeople are critical at that time, people get into a controversy.

Since that it is a society of rapiddevelopment, the criteria and the further conclusion of one's greatness mightbe altered or even reversed stemming from the fast changing social values. Thejudgment is subject to the time and thus becomes easily varied. Given the morerational and scientific method they use, the people who live after thehistorical figures could offer a general assessment comprehensibly. Moreover,by taking more practice of the events in contemporary society, the role of thehistorical figures could be recognized thoroughly.

However, it seems biased by just takingtemporal factors into consideration. The crucial role of some heroes could bemeaningful only by judged by the people living at their time derived from thatthey are living in the same historical conditions and with the samedifficulties to overcome. The documents those contemporary people make use ofto evaluate the role of the historical figures might be incomplete if some ofthe documents were lost and destroyed in transportation. With the abovefactors, the estimation of the contemporary society and people might be lesslikely to be valid.

Nonetheless, it is always one-sided todetermine the greatness of some certain historical figures neither by contemporarypeople nor by the people living at their time. It could be comprehensiblyassessed that the role of the figures is great when combining the two sidestogether as a general. Since that there is not absolute right or wrong ofhistorical events, thus there is commeasurably no absolute greatness of thepeople who started or participated in the events. Common sense tells us thatdifferent criteria derived from the time would undoubtedly result in variedassessment. Taking Adolf Hitler as an example, it might be likely that he waswar criminal and fascist ostensibly who force thousands of refugee to flee fromtheir homeland , however, the war he started accelerated the progress of theindustries, more suprisingly, his talent in oration makes him highly respected.

In sum, though whether a historical figureis great or not still awaits discussion, I still cling to a belief that the contemporaryassessment is more accurate and convincible. Only by comprehending the methodscould the disadvantages be weakened and the advantages benefit thecomprehensive estimation of the historical figures.
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2012-9-10 23:51:55 | 只看该作者
我觉得最后的例子是不是有点不太合适
还有,打字速度慢,且真心做不到边打字边想作文思路, 我只能一件一件来 这么一想一变换句式 时间过得那叫个快啊
求建议!
板凳
发表于 2012-9-11 07:42:21 | 只看该作者
Since that it is a society of rapid development,

这句话这样写就好:as the society develops rapidly...

不用用那么多of...一些没必要的反而会显得不专业的句式。。
地板
发表于 2012-9-11 22:05:42 | 只看该作者
第一段没有观点哦
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发表于 2012-9-11 22:10:09 | 只看该作者
其实如果你多做一些具体的分析,而不要过多的放在比较空的分析上,你会很容易掌控的,比如说,一个人能够被当代人称为伟大,需要具备什么条件,是什么样的类型的,而如果只能被后人评价,又是什么样的人,需要什么样的条件,等等,多做具体分析,你的思路就不会狭隘了
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-9-11 22:46:23 | 只看该作者
Since that it is a society of rapid development,

这句话这样写就好:as the society develops rapidly...

不用用那么多of...一些没必要的反而会显得不专业的句式。。
-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/9/11 7:42:21)

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