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发表于 2012-5-7 22:08:22 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
63. There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts—especially at a great cost in money and jobs—to save endangered animal or plant species.



Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.



提纲:
1. 从成本分析看,人类似乎没有必要为拯救濒危物种花费太多代价,人们完全可以将这巨大的财力和物力花费在更多需要救助的人,创造更多的就业岗位,改善人们的生活环境;而且即使我们做出努力,有些物种还是会灭绝。。
2. 但人们应该为自己的行为负责,科技进步改善人们生活的同时,也增强了人们干预和破坏自然环境的能力,致使给许多生物带来栖息地和食物等的威胁,破坏了生态环境;而且这个过程已经危害了人类自身的生存。
3. 各物种都有其自身生存的权力,他们的存在直接或间接地促进了人类的繁荣。人类不能因为眼前有限的成就而忽略了对其它生命的敬畏和责任。(散)


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With the explosive development of technology and science, people pay more attention to relation between ecology and society. The speaker claims that the society should not sacrifice the money and jobs to save the endangered animals or plant species. Admittedly, it is important to contribute the money to social development. However, every creature has the value of existence and we cannot deprive of their right to live.

Admittedly, it seems unnecessary for human to save the endangered species at a great cost in money and jobs from the perspective of selfcost. And human could use the enormous financial and physical resource to assist people in need and produce more jobs to relieve the employment pressure. So we could improve the living standard and have a more comfortable life. Additionally, even though human take measures to protect some species, they still have the possibility to extinct because of the natural competition.


However, human should be responsible for their damage to species. As the advanced technology improves the life of human, it also increases the capacity of human to interfere and damage the natural environment, which threaten the habitat and food of the animal or plant. Such as Qinhai-Tibet railway in China, the build of the railway has destroyed so many forests and lawns that causes the extinction of many species. Moreover, it also endanger human ourselves with annihilation of some species. Such as the depopulation of frogs as a result of pesticides, the number of pests is increasing, such as mosquito and fly which influence the life and production of human. Unless human spend financial and physical power to take efficacious measures for protecting the endangered species, the harmful effect on human would aggravate and jeopardize human in the end.


Actually, all creatures have its right to live and their existence helps to build a balance of ecology. And they contribute to the human prosperity directly or indirectly. For instance, some species have the potential value for scientific research, such asthe cure for a cancer or studying the relationship between different organisms. And we human should not neglect the awe and responsibilities for other lifes for the immediate benefits.


In summary, though human should pay attention to the social development and obtain a better environment for human living, it should not ignore the ecological balance and we should also save the endangered species out of the respect to life and the protection for human benefits.
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沙发
发表于 2012-5-7 22:59:57 | 只看该作者
很喜欢这篇提纲,good job!!
板凳
发表于 2012-5-8 11:59:17 | 只看该作者
With the explosive development of technology and science,这句话被用到不止三次了吧
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2012-5-8 14:01:52 | 只看该作者
With the explosive development of technology and science,这句话被用到不止三次了吧
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/5/8 11:59:17)

开头必备,多好啊!!!都不用想。。。。
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发表于 2012-5-8 15:53:24 | 只看该作者
With the explosive development of technology and science,这句话被用到不止三次了吧
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/5/8 11:59:17)


开头必备,多好啊!!!都不用想。。。。
-- by 会员 zhouyue0223 (2012/5/8 14:01:52)

你可以看看    xiao超超1992    的作文,找一些觉得比较好的地方  
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