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[issue] 求教ISSUE 这样子写所有的ISSUE有点自相矛盾 关系大吗?

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发表于 2012-1-27 16:58:02 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Q1、ISSUE我用的笔法基本都是让步承认原题在某些情况下成立但是原题的话在另一个情况下不成立。哪怕原题说的事某种趋势大多usually成立,我就只要说还是有很多情况不成立。----这样OK?

Q2、但是如上的写法有些情况下,如果不仔细推敲,是存在一些自相矛盾的,但我只要就CASE说CASE成立就行了吧? 毕竟ISSUE也是是非问题。
举个例子
政府官员应该依靠他们的判断,而不是毫无疑问地实施他们所服务人们的意愿。
大部分赞同.
REASON1:政府官员比民众更冷静,更考虑大局,对整个国际形势和国家问题有更深刻的认识。而往往一个政府官员上任需要经过很多考核。
REASON2:民众的意愿往往比较冲动,而且占社会大多数民众的想法都比较简单,缺乏远见。比如韩国天安号事件。导致。。。。。
REASON3:对政治家来说,有些原则是不能够妥协的。极少有政治家不坚定自己的想法而获得巨大成功的人。
小部分反对:
REASON1:如果政府忽略了民众的意见,就会带来一些政治上的盲目性,即领导人只以自己的观点为准,而且如果这个领导人受到了金钱的诱惑,就有可能仅为自己牟利,脱离大众需求,甚至结果会counterproductive,因为政府是作为一个组织来服务人民的。脱离了对人民的服务,政府就没有必要存在了。比如说朝鲜,政府指挥着发展军事力量,而人民都希望发展经济,导致朝鲜虽然军事XX但是人民生活水平不高,导致经济基础薄弱,军事力量的发展缺乏坚实后盾。再比如中国毛泽东引起的文化大革命,严重的导致中国落后西方10年,大量高科技人才外流。




我就想知道我这样写,会不会有大问题,就是那种一扣就扣很多分得那种。我不求高分。

我上面问题隐含的矛盾是,赞同里面的理由说政府官员比民众更考虑大局,与下面说政府官员的盲目性是否矛盾? 还是说因为CASE BY CASE 就不算矛盾了?


一个通用的解决方法是不是只要加上:修饰数量的词就gloss over了? 比如说大多数,小部分?
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沙发
发表于 2012-1-28 13:59:40 | 只看该作者
如果是case by case,一定要归类,而且要组织好。不能东一个西一个地写。

我觉得你列的两种都是常规写发,不会出很大的问题。只要论述做好就行。

作文高分主要还是靠逻辑。
板凳
发表于 2012-1-28 14:00:06 | 只看该作者
写几篇发过来给大家看看。作文一定要写,不能纸上谈兵的。
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2012-2-1 11:05:10 | 只看该作者
89、[Claim] Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and
the legal system. [Reason] Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts
or minds.
[Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or
disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.]


Does many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system? The writer maintains that because of the inability of law to change what is already in people's mind or hearts.However, I admit sometimes it is true that law couldn't address some problem.But I firmly contend law is still in effect that it can solve considerable problem and partly disagree with the reasoning of the writers' proposition.Here are some compelling reasons that illustrate strongly my viewpoint.
  Actually, there are some kind of situation that cannot be solve by laws.Because of its special complexity. For instance, if a account has found a great opportunity to transfer money from the government to himself with no one is watching and no evidence of computer could be found, and if he is not that upright, he would do to steal the money because he is entranced by the money.Can his self-conscience wake him up? Perhaps not.Because laws cannot change what is already in people's mind just as the voracious account's.
  However, in some situations, laws do can change what is in people's mind and heart. Because when law become something connected with or infused to ethics, people's mind would be changed. So the key for a law to change people's mind is whether the law is infused with ethics -the general norm that society is fit with.For example, rape is a felony in modern society, but in Roman long long ago.It is not a serious felony.Because war is of great amount.And it usually happens when the warriors came home find their wife has been grasped by other warriors of other country.And even their wives called them to leave for another castle to have wars with another country to get other's wives. So that ethics at that time didn't regard such thing as a extreme evil. On the contrary,when ethic norm is influenced by law,then the effect of law would be put into effect. For instance, the slave is not widely condemned until the law against slaves had been effective. So it is true that laws can change what is inside people's mind.
  Even admitting that laws cannot change what is in people's mind or hearts, many problem can still be solved by laws. Because law has its undeniable power and it is obligatory which everyone should follow the rules and behave according to it. For example, even there are some many people that consider about robbing a bank, most of them would not actually to do it. Because it is too dangerous when they are punished by law,usually it would be a whole-life-immure, even if they still dream about robbing.And it's the power of law to stop people from practicing the illegal behavior.
In conclusion, I maintain law is still in effect that it can solve considerable problem.
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