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发表于 2012-1-5 19:29:06 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
本人英语水平一般,写作最差,教授催我明天给她签,赶了一天,因为自己没什么学术背景,全写了课上的内容,百分之百真实事件。希望好心人指正一下。
To Whom It May Concern,



I am delighted to write this recommendation letter for Miss Cai XX, a brilliant student of mine, who is applying to your university for admission to graduate program of XXXXXX in the coming fall semester 2012.



In the first semester of academic year 2010-2011, Miss Cai took the course in Financial Investments Practice under my instruction. Needless to say, the course demanded financial expertise and practical ability. Always arriving at the classroom earliest and sitting in the front row, Miss Cai showed great fascination with this field. Although she is an introverted girl, she never hesitates to share her ideas in class. In midterm, Miss Cai was assigned to group homework whose topic was to research Chinese fund management companies. She gave a speech on behalf of her group to the whole class. Her presentation was so fluent and convincing that showed their research findings systematically. Then she answered classmates’ and my questions correctly. Without doubt, I gave her group a high score for their excellent research ability and her clear expression.



What has impressed me most about Miss Cai is that she always possesses substantial financial information. Unlike other students who only focus on the textbooks, she also pays close attention to the economic events. I remember clearly once I asked the whole class a question about the most famous fund manager in China in recent years. What made me disappointed was that the class was silent at first. However, I heard Miss Cai answer me soon. As far as I know, she concerns about the latest events and the focal figures in financial field. Her performance in my class was quite outstanding since she could respond to my questions which others had not heard of.



From Miss Cai’s performance in class and homework, I could see that she had acquired extensive knowledge in the financial analysis as well as investment management. Her great research ability and enthusiasm for finance demonstrate her superior scholastic capacity and her potential for further academic growth.


Considering Miss Cai a student of high potential, I recommend her without reservation. Your assistance and kind consideration of her application will be highly appreciated. If further information about her is required, please do not hesitate to let me know.


Sincerely,
(Signature)
XXXXX
Professor of XXXX University

Head of the Finance Teaching and Research Section
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沙发
发表于 2012-1-5 19:39:15 | 只看该作者
I remember clearly once I asked the whole class a question about the most famous fund manager in China in recent years. What made me disappointed was that the class was silent at first. However, I heard Miss Cai answer me soon.

这个例子,太弱,会让人质疑你这个班的整体水平是不是有问题。。。建议换个牛逼一点的例子。

然后把Miss Cai改成你的first name。

最后留上电话以示诚意。
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-1-5 19:47:32 | 只看该作者
谢谢好心人呐!我不是牛人,我举这个例子是想表达在课堂上能和老师积极互动,其他同学的课外知识确实都不怎么的。我感觉这段自己想表达这个意思,但是都在重复,我惭愧,不知该怎么表达~~~~~~~~~~~
地板
发表于 2012-1-5 20:02:30 | 只看该作者
I remember clearly once I asked the whole class a question about the most famous fund manager in China in recent years. What made me disappointed was that the class was silent at first. However, I heard Miss Cai answer me soon.

这个例子,太弱,会让人质疑你这个班的整体水平是不是有问题。。。建议换个牛逼一点的例子。

然后把Miss Cai改成你的first name。

最后留上电话以示诚意。
-- by 会员 gmatfucker (2012/1/5 19:39:15)



不好意思,我笑了。。。哈哈
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发表于 2012-1-5 20:20:34 | 只看该作者
第一个可以详细的说明一下,我觉得关键是要有自己的看法,这个不存在正确和不正确的,第二个是有点弱,不如不写。。。
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发表于 2012-1-5 20:24:19 | 只看该作者
还有,miss cai实在太生疏了,直接名字就完事了呗
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-1-5 20:32:20 | 只看该作者
还有,miss cai实在太生疏了,直接名字就完事了呗
-- by 会员 talentgirl (2012/1/5 20:24:19)


谢谢!我写的时候也觉得生疏,但是我之前看的牛人例文都是有称谓的,所以我就这样用了,现在改过来。
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-1-5 20:33:31 | 只看该作者
第一个可以详细的说明一下,我觉得关键是要有自己的看法,这个不存在正确和不正确的,第二个是有点弱,不如不写。。。
-- by 会员 talentgirl (2012/1/5 20:20:34)


谢谢!第二个是没有代表性,我删减一下。
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发表于 2012-1-6 00:07:45 | 只看该作者
I remember clearly once I asked the whole class a question about the most famous fund manager in China in recent years. What made me disappointed was that the class was silent at first. However, I heard Miss Cai answer me soon.

这个例子,太弱,会让人质疑你这个班的整体水平是不是有问题。。。建议换个牛逼一点的例子。

然后把Miss Cai改成你的first name。

最后留上电话以示诚意。
-- by 会员 gmatfucker (2012/1/5 19:39:15)

最后一句不用主谓一致吗
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