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haha~``那估计版上好多人都要给ziye姐你汇款了~`

What is your expectation? Ask somebody to write or provide constructive feedback?

我倒是可以帮你看看，提提建议，因为我白天得上班，晚上上课，所以可能没那么多时间帮你写，你要是写好了，可以发给我，我给你看看，提提建议

I believe you could find a person to talk about yourself deeply and go through all of your background with him to let him see the big picture about you. And then discuss every bullet point in your resume to determine if there is anything could help you stand out.

Keep in mind that all of different materials are different aspects of a entire package; you should highlight your professional achievements on your resume instead of a simple list of your job responsibilities, clearly describe the deep reason and thinking process of your career goals in your PS/essay, more importantly, discuss some reasons for "how this program at this school is so different to help you achieve your career goal", and remember to include personal reflection from your experience mentioned in your resume and link your past to your future. Finally, strategically determine who are the best candidates for your recommendation letter and ask them to comment your soft skills more.

Actually I've post some personal comments on how to prepare for application materials, maybe you can search my ID to figure out if anything could help. Good luck for your application!

I believe you could find a person to talk about yourself deeply and go through all of your background with him to let him see the big picture about you. And then discuss every bullet point in your resume to determine if there is anything could help you stand out.

Keep in mind that all of different materials are different aspects of a entire package; you should highlight your professional achievements on your resume instead of a simple list of your job responsibilities, clearly describe the deep reason and thinking process of your career goals in your PS/essay, more importantly, discuss some reasons for "how this program at this school is so different to help you achieve your career goal", and remember to include personal reflection from your experience mentioned in your resume and link your past to your future. Finally, strategically determine who are the best candidates for your recommendation letter and ask them to comment your soft skills more.