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小弟的习作一片,求各位老师批改,求拍砖

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As the advertising and other relevant industries become more and more sophisticated, it seems like people, regardless their age, occupation, and gender all like eating various junk food, and their habit are becoming further far from healthy. Some believe it was the matter of advertising. Nevertheless, contrary to the opinion of many people in my heartfelt objecting to the idea that advertising is the unique reason that result to this phenomenon.



Any discussion of this issue inevitably involved economic. Like people are separated by different classes, according to the wages, Foods have the same problem. What's more, the huge distinction between the wealth and the poor, the astonishing this phenomenon will. A particular case in point is in the remote field of my country, there are still my people are under the line of poverty. So, just image what you would do, if you are a person during that situation. When people enjoy their delicious food, isn't it necessary that they give some consideration to their compatriot who is lack of nutrition.



Part of the explanation is by reason of personal habit. Nowadays, people are becoming more and more lazing. Needless to say, there are a growing number of people who are addicted by drug or alcohol. What's more, Staying up all night or sleeping more than 12 hours in once a time are not rare. In fact, frequently many people, especially the one who is living in the city, have some experience like this. For instance, my sister is a ordinary Chinese senior middle school student who is considered by many to be the most particular role in their life. For admitting to a good university, she has to wake up as early as can she, and eat faster than do others. Therefore, Having a healthy diet is seems like built the Rome in one day.



Certainly, advertising is an important reason that cause of terrible diet. Not only it misguide costume, especially the children and juvenile, to eat some junk food and to buy some doubtable produce, but also because of advertisement will increase the cost, the quality of the food will gradually declined.



In conclusion, although advertising is play in a important role in causing people have bad habits, overall, we should be aware of the potential damaging impacts made by others on my aspect of our social life.
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