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刚开始准备作文，30分钟写了一篇，跪求指导意见啊
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题目是： do you agree or disagree with the statement
young people should try different job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term
正文：
When asked about what job you want to do in the future, most children would come up with the
answer of policemen or astronauts. It's easy to understand that as children , those jobs seem
super cool to them. But the truth is , few people stick to their dreams to become policemen
eventually. Sometimes, those cool jobs may not be suitable to you at all. As young people, we are
supposed to try different jobs before we settle down to the target career and here are severel
reasons.
First of all, one can only figure out what kind of jobs he or she is good at by trying different
jobs first. For example, Tomas Edison have tried almost ten different jobs, from a salesman to a
newspaper dilivery man and from a mechanic to a bartender. After severel years of changing
career, he was finally aware of what he really wanted to do was to become an inventor. Thus he
started a series of inventions, which tremendously changed the world we live.
What's more, if you do not like the current job, it is strongly suggested that you change it
right now before you are stucked into it. Many people are afraid of changing their career and
instead, they work for decades in the position which make them depressed. Unfortunately,
phychologists point out that these sorts of people are more vulnerable to stress, fear and even
physical diseases. Consequently, for the sake of your own health, remember to find the right job
no matter if it takes you much time through changing career.
Finally, changing career will provide us with a long vacation, which could let us relex ourself
and spend some quality time with friends and families. If we take the jobs after graduation and
never consider changing them, that means we could only enjoy couples of weeks of vacations
annually. Stress and fatigue will always accompany us. It is brutal to youngmen and that's why we
are suppoed to change our jobs frequently before we are ready to settle down.
Some people may critique this idea , reckoning changing career frequently unresponsible and
unreliable, but as young man , we are not ashamed at do so. Due to the above mentioned reasons, I
stongly believe that young people should try different jobs before settle down to the satisfing
career. |
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