本月作文机经AA第一篇，为什么在题库里找不到？是说题库66的

洛洛洛洛 · 发表于 2010-2-17 14:11:20

1. 题库66. The following appeared in a memorandum from the CEO of a consumer electronics manufacturing firm to the head of the company's human resources department, who is responsible for hiring new employees:

“Eight years ago, our firm’s profits were increasing with each new employee we added. We discovered that each employee had the skills and motivation to generate more revenue for the firm than his or her salary cost us. However, for the past two years, our profit margin has been falling, even though we have continued to add employees. Thus, our newer employees are not generating enough revenue to justify their salaries. We must not be hiring new employees with the same level of skills and motivation as those we used to attract. Clearly, then, failures in the human resources department account for our falling profits.”

就是这篇，大侠们帮忙指导下
我觉得是
1、8年前不能推现在
2、causal oversimplification
然后就找不出了...有没有范文参考啊

Rapunzel36 · 发表于 2010-2-18 00:55:50

只是个人意见，希望大家补充~
1.无因果：八年前的利润增加不一定是因为新员工，可能是整体经济繁荣
而2年内的利润减少可能是因为整体经济衰落
2.叙事不可信：测试手段有误，新员工带来的收入不一定大于工资
3.错误对比：招聘的员工部门不同
4.公司整体战略的缺陷，而不是HR的错误

不是题库的，题库66是旅游业的~

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