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题目是OG模拟里的 live with parents or live alone我的作文不行
There is a phenomena in the nature world that when the birds’ wings have accumulated enough strength and power, they will leave their parents to explore the outside world. From my point of view, I prefer to live with my family for a longer time. In the following paragraph , I will elaborate the reasons abundantly.
The first reason is that, as an younger adult, my physical and mental condition are not developed completely. Meeting difficulty and dilemma in the study and life is inevitable , parents’ suggestions and directions played an important role in our life. It is their unselfish instruction that lead us to the success we working for. It is their dedication to us that lighten the darkness and clear the confusion we meet. If the troublesome condition we meet alone, because of limited experience and poorly psychological withstanding, we may have no one to ask for help. It may have an negative influence on our naïve and pure soul, which may lead to psychological problems.
Further more , having not acquire various knowledge and experience is a drawback of living alone. Living alone means you need to do everything, including paying for the utility, do laundry, cooking , cleaning the room etc, which will take up enormous time in your daily life. When you are developing your career life, main attention should be paid to the vocation rather than to the trivial housework. Comparing living with parents, everything is prepared perfectly. Your concentration is on the career, your opportunity of promotion and success is obviously increased.
In conclusion, living alone may bring your unexpected and precious experience which will applied in your later life and career and prove that you are a brave and enthusiastic person.But the risk is unpredictable and failure will always be with you. At this moment, living with family is a good choice for me.
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发表于 2010-2-4 16:13:54
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