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Columbia Essay 2: practice taught you more than theory. 大家能聊聊思路么

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发表于 2009-12-7 07:51:40 | 只看该作者
Absolutely right, which is why a good essay will balance telling what you did (the practice) and why you did it (the theory).

And also absolutely right, which is why not everyone gets an interview or gets into CBS. It's so much easier to say, 'his GMAT of 770 is better than mine, which is 700', but not so easy to say, 'his essays were better than mine'. In my opinion the essays are so much more important, and so much harder to get right, and I'm not sure how many people on CD realise this. Even Yifan, who got an interview, has a different view from myself, who has never applied. Most people turn to alumni (for instance Yifan, in three years) for help with essays, and they tell you how they would have written an essay. So everyone follows Yifan's framework, which is very good too, and easier to understand to boot, and I become the only one using this 正-反-合 framework. Maybe because of that I get in, and not everyone else. Again, following the past successes of everyone else, is exactly what ensures that you end up failing to get in.

But really, after a while it becomes so ridiculously complicated trying to follow what others do, or what you think others will do, or what you think others will think you will do... and so on. Again, it's a complex world. I tend to prefer to write an essay based on my own views. So 正-反-合 it is.
-- by 会员 jelt2359 (2009/12/7 4:51:50)


I really started to see how your mind works! Maybe that is why your got into the Lauder program....

Thesis - Antithesis - Synthesis.  
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发表于 2009-12-7 10:59:12 | 只看该作者
读了正-反-合这个concept,感觉头好晕啊。。。而且
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-12-7 22:56:48 | 只看该作者
Without practice, you will never know which theory is appropriate. Without theory, you will not be able to learn from the mistakes and successes of others, and practice will be wasteful and never-ending.

The two sentences above, of course, are also a theory of how to approach theory and practice.



这句话真的很BH~不过我喜欢你写的例子:-)

我是sales function,focus就是how to sell more and better, 是一个typical实践胜于理论的岗位。所以在文章的结尾我会写在经历了这么多年 practical experience后,渴望去一个能把practice和theory完美结合的MBA program

对有丰富工作经验的人来说,大可以自信的展示。这篇论文恐怕对一些刚出学校又要进入MBA学习的人来说要好好动动脑子。
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发表于 2009-12-7 23:16:20 | 只看该作者
"实践胜于理论" 也是一种理论/做事的方式。

所谓的"理论"指的是一种思想;所谓的实践就是见机行事。如果每次都是见机行事,那就是一种新的理论思想了,表示在任何一个场合都不相信营销理论是可用的。
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发表于 2009-12-7 23:43:09 | 只看该作者
看了yifan的分享,我也分享一下我的这篇essay的思路吧。文章题目是practical experience taught you more than theory alone,既然强调了ALONE,我觉得adcom还是要看申请者有没有理论实践相联系的能力。

我的文章基本结构是:
1。因为理论知识,成功的解决了一个现实难题。
2。理论非常好,但是通过实践发现了一个未知领域。
3。大力描述如何在这个未知领域探索,学会了新的知识,了解了新的现实,并提炼了自己的新的理论 - 经验和知,并在以后继续将自己的新的理论付诸于实际操作。
4。总结:理论是必须的,但是实践更可贵,因为实践提供了无限的机会。然后再次强调master class和自己从master class中受益的决心。

看了大家的yifan和jason的分享,觉得受益也很多。其实同样一篇文章,真的有很多角度。就像jason说的那样,从自己感觉最深刻的角度来写,可能essay会更容易打动别人。
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发表于 2009-12-8 00:36:39 | 只看该作者
What is the theory? Why it should be applied to a specific case? Becasue the writer did good analysis and homework, and took initiatives----the case falls into the bracket for the theory.
Then, move on to articulate how you applied the theory...Theory is like the skeleton, while soft skils are meat part. You leveraged resources, communicated, worked in a team environment, and polished leadership.
That's how you put theory into practice, and understood that one needs to pay attention to the soft-side as well. Then mention a bit how the program itself could add value to your soft-skills...
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