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When faced with the discussion over whether financial gain is the most important factor in choosing a career different people hold different views due to their respect angles.Some peopole ,like the arguer of this statement,contend that financial gain is the  primary factor to consider,while others favored the opposite position.From my own perspective,whether one has advantage over the other depends  on the specific circumstance. In other words,I partially agree with the argument that financial gain is a important factor when choosing a career,at the same time I need to refute it because it suffers from some serious drawbacks .In the following analysis, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support the disscussion above.

For one thing,it must be pointed out that the author overstates financial asset’s comparative significance, and fail to take into account other essential factors. Frankly speaking, this assertion is also unwarranted .  I believe that the most compelling— is the author overlooked the the value of a human being, that is to say, as a person, we have our goal , Have our emotional finding jobs provide us a platform to achieve our aspiration.To give a desmonstration,Dalwnism once to be a prest,but he showed greatest interests in biology,he gave up his career and later traveled around the world to research a great many plants. Moreever,both common sense and our experience inform us that Under this circumstance enthusiasm  is the radical  thing we shuld consider.

For another, the good work condition and confortable relationships with workmates are

 also very crucial.As we know ,circumstance can impact  a person and his emotions to a large degree,if you don't satisfy you work conditon and are not in harmony with the other people around we may feel anxiety and disappointed and this can result low efficeint when working.I once worked in company,the workplace was very near to a highway and considerable noisy,everyday I feel tired and hope a serene office, this motivation was so strength that I change my job three months later.All the evidence demonstrates no doubt that financial gain is not the most fundamentalfactor in choosing a career.

Admittely,to some extent ,I agree with the author’s opinion since we do not live in a fairy tail ,we need to eat ,to live and so on.To be honest,without fainancial asset ,we can hardly subsist in the world.A good example maybe find is the poet Haizi who is a genius in poetry but do not possess the fundamental weaoth to live ,and at last he commited suicide. Under this circumstance, I and the author part company.

To sum up, on one hand  other than financial asset we have too many thing to appreciate,on the other hand seek  wealth and glory apporiately is necessary.Although due to the diverse culture that thousand individuals may hold thousand views,take into account the above reasons ,we may safely and undoubtly arrived the conclusion that financial gain is important factor when choosing a career but not the primary one .