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作文还是得自己做模板！！！
本人考GRE时照抄模板，结果惨败。这次考机考的TOEFL时我仔细参考了大约5篇不同的模板，然后自己做了个模板。不知怎的，作文得了个满分。而且我第一句话就犯了个低级错误：Just before developing...我写成了Just before develop...，居然忘记了介词后应该跟动名词而不是动词原形，但仍然得了满分，真是意外。本人自己做的模板如下，希望能对大伙有帮助。
说明：
(单)是指适用于(单一观点式)，，(对)是指适用于(对立观点式，也可看作二选一观点式)，，(选)是指适用于(选择观点式，即多选一或二选一观点式)，，(选 or 对)是指适用于(单一观点式 or 选择观点式)。()里的内容可要可不要，根据情况而定。A是指观点A，B是指观点B。
Just before developing my perspective in the following presentation, I must admit it is truly {[(单)difficult to choose between whether we should “agree with ### or disagree with ###”] / [(对)indispensable to take a scrutiny/glimpse at what I want to discuss (对)on both sides/position/ (选)in each situation]}? Many of us take the view that “(选 or 对)A”/ “(单)agree with ###” is more appealing/better, but other people, (on the contrary), emphasize/dispute “(选 or 对)B”/ “(单)disagree with ###”.
As far as I am concerned, if I have to face a choice/face with such a issue, I would rather “(选 or 对)A”/ “(单)agree with ###” or “(选 or 对)B”/ “(单)disagree with ###”. Let me share my point of view with you and demonstrate my position by giving reason and presenting evidence in the following elucidation/discussion.
Among many reasons for/why ###, in here, I am glad to explore/offer a few of the most convincing ones. First and the foremost, ###. A good example may be found in the case that ###. Don’t you think these examples quoted above are very persuasive?
Another main and powerful reason that I must emphasize is that ###. If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.
One more very persuasive/strong argument that I cannot neglect is that ###.
Of course, superior as “(选 or 对)A”/ “(单)agree with ###” or “(选 or 对)B”/ “(单)disagree with ###” is, “(选 or 对)A”/ “(单)agree with ###” or “(选 or 对)B”/ “(单)disagree with ###” also has its own defects, too. Such as ###. Whereas, on balance, the merits of “(选 or 对)A”/ “(单)agree with ###” or “(选 or 对)B”/ “(单)disagree with ###” bear more weight than/outweigh those of demerits of “(选 or 对)B”/ “(单)disagree with ###” or “(选 or 对)A”/ “(单)agree with ###”.
So, Taking into account of all these factors/from what has been discussed above, (given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than anyone of them), we can safely claim the assertion that … As a matter of fact, not only do I prefer to A(B), but also prefer to 一个建议 as ### as possible.
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