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Another SC question

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发表于 2003-12-21 14:49:00 | 只看该作者

Another SC question

刘振民的书 E7-37. The book pick (C); but is it a problem to put "armed" right after "Hungary"?
I think (B) is better, what do you think?

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Traveling the back roads of Hungary, in 1905 Bela Bartok and Zooltan Kodaly began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, and they were armed only with an Edison phonograph and insatiable curiosity.
(A) Traveling the back roads of Hungary, in 1905 Bela Bartok and Zooltan Kodaly began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, and they were armed only
(B) In 1905, Bela Bartok and Zooltan Kodaly, traveling the back roads of Hungary, began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, and they were only armed
(C) In 1905, Bela Barotok and Zooltan Kodaly began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, traveling the back roads of Hungary armed only
(D) Having traveled the back roads of Hungary, in 1905 Bela Bartok and Zooltan Kodaly began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology; they were only armed
(E) Bela Bartok and Zooltan Kodaly, in 1905 began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, traveling the back roads of Hungary, arming themselves only








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沙发
发表于 2003-12-21 19:40:00 | 只看该作者
B 1,罗嗦,一个句子非要分成两个写,
2,这样一来,in 1905变成只修饰前一个句子了
3,前一个句子的谓语began ...和后一个句子的谓语were armed变成了两个独立的动作,而实际上armed with应该是表述伴随方式。句子重心变化了。大忌!
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