[求助]请大家帮我分析一下我的背景

嗬嗬，其实LZ最头疼的是Essay素材的问题，可惜这个也是大家不太能帮得上忙的

我的建议是LZ花点心思和时间想想Essay定位和故事卖点的问题，这是整个package最重要的部分，如果这个部分不能取得突破和加分的话，建议LZ再多一些经历后再申请

换句话说，你的硬性条件虽不算突出，但也决不会拖后腿，整个事情的关键就在于对自己的挖掘上了

My 2 Cents

no necessity to retake GMAT

your experience is brilliant but way too young for top 20

there're several turning points need to be clarified in your career

why you took Spanish as your major instead of Economy

and what's the correlation among your major, minor, consulting experience, and your future career in finance?

why now? you made an assumption that other dimensions of life are subject to your mba study.

but the truth is not. Here I assume you're talking about your balance in family life.

You can see the typical student profile of any mba schools. A big portion of them build family at the same time or even earlier. Almost a half of mba students in Ross Business School bring their children.

You have quite unusual foreign experience that can make you stand out from the pack. It's not about how big your achievement is, but how deep the quality is and its meaning to your life.

The last one is the passion. Why finance? Is there anything in your personality or interests lead you to finance? Are you sensitive to money? Are you also good at numbers? Do you invest by yourself? make any profit? How do you manage your own money anyway?

There must be some triggers in your life to give you directions. Find them and leverage them well. It's not about getting into what mba, it's about your rest-of-life career.

As long as you can find out these answers, the fit schools will emerge by themselves.

then you can market yourself accordingly.

you have to explain "why finance",

and, your WE is bit weak for top 20 program,

for example:  international experience might be rare in China but it is quite common in the western world and 3 months is definitely too short, sounds more like doing training more than doing actual work, so it doesn't necessarily makes you stand out.

真的是收益非浅，我要好好思考一下这些问题的答案，非常感谢各位！！