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It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money.

Nowadays,people are always engaging in their job all the time.For this reason,whether you choose a job that you enjoy or a job to earn a lot of money is important.We are constantly struggling between the two choices.Though a job with a high salary seems to be a great temptation to me,I perfer to one I enjoy.
  First of all,choosing a job is related to what career you take up.We've studied in school for more than ten years,and what's our motivation to study so diligently?The answer is that we want to fullfill our dream and that we want to persue our own destiny.As a result of this purpose,how can you work at a job you don't like,even it offers you a high monthly income?In my opinion,we must pursue our dream,thus,I strongly support to choose a job we enjoy instead of one with high salary.
  Moreover,as we are not seemingly to change jobs from time to time,we will probably work at a job for a long time.Then,how can we bear a job we don't like throughout our life?Why should we suffer the dullness and loneliness from a job we don't enjoy? It is obvious that if you work at a job you enjoy,you don't have to face such problems.It can be just the opposite.Because of your favour in the job,you may enjoy working all day alone and don't feel tired and exhausted.
  In addition,a job you enjoy may stimulate you to work harder and in this way, you may get promotion.Thus,you will have a job both you enjoy and you can earn a lot of money,which sounds a big deal.Maybe you will get into a good circular,enjoying your job and working hard, getting promotion and having higher salary,and then being much more fond of your job ,getting another promotion...You may also be inspired and can innovate creative way of working.Perhaps this will make you a good model for  other employers.What a nice choice!A job with your interest,high salary,and honour.
   Although choosing a job you enjoy perhaps means you will have lower salary at first,but because of the fact that you are keen on it,I'm sure sooner or later you will have an ideal job with both high salary and enjoyment.

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Nowadays, people are always engaging in their job all the time. For this reason, whether you choose a job that you enjoy or a job to earn a lot of money is important. We are constantly struggling between the two choices. Though a job with a high salary seems to be a great temptation to me, I perfer to one I enjoy.

(Currently, living in a rapid-pace world, we contribute most of our daily time to dealings at work. Job satisfaction directly influences one’s emotion and mental health. So what type of job is the most enjoyable, a job attractive enough to stir curiousness to allow ones to engage in or a job with a lot of money but boredom everyday? I believe every person have different attitude toward this dilemma. From my perspective, I prefer to one I enjoy even few can refuse a great temptation of a high salary of job.)