这篇ESSAY如何写？Provide an assessment of your strengths and weaknesses

danielwang · 发表于 2003-12-3 17:23:00

“Provide an assessment of your strengths and weaknesses. Describe a situation where you demonstrated leadership skills in order to realize a better outcome.”

关于这个题目如何写，我和一个朋友有了不同的理解，还请各位指点。

tsljz · 发表于 2003-12-3 21:21:00

what is your understanding?

It seems that the strengths and weaknesses should be something about your leadership. To describe a situation when you demonstrated leadership to achieve a better outcome, you may write something to show how you have a clear vision, how you persuaded others, influenced others, how you acted on your plan, and what the results were.

my 2 cents.

danielwang · 发表于 2003-12-3 23:01:00

我的理解是分别说一下自己的优点（如主动性、团队精神、责任感）、缺点（如缺乏策略管理等方面的系统知识，需通过学习MBA来弥补等），不做展开。然后举一个例子，说明自己如何把整个团队凝聚起来克服困难完成一项任务。但我的朋友的理解是把优缺点和这个案例结合起来写，通过这个案例不仅展示了领导能力而且还克服了自己的缺点，不知道哪种理解正确。请请教！

sfish · 发表于 2003-12-3 23:33:00

Your friend's strategy maybe better.

joyoni · 发表于 2003-12-4 05:43:00

agree with sfish.

in fact, this is the better way, even if your way is working also.

tsljz · 发表于 2003-12-4 12:37:00

yeah, you can't say too many things in one essay. What you say about yourself needs to be supported with specific examples. So try to focus on one or two points.

sige95800 · 发表于 2003-12-4 20:22:00

现正在为这个问题发愁
我的理解和 danielwang是一样的
他的朋友建议虽好，但是不好操作

希望继续得到各位指点

这篇ESSAY如何写？Provide an assessment of your strengths and weaknesses

这篇ESSAY如何写？Provide an assessment of your strengths and weaknesses

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