[求助]强烈请求大家帮我看看第一次写作1why do people attend college?

This fall is the same normal season as before, however, to many people who are admitted to the university , this is a totally new start point of their future lives .This new fall is the start point of the further education ,the basis for the later career and the key point that even change the direction of their unknown future.

Through the study in the university  ,  not only the knowledge in their majors the students can get ,but also the substantial experiences that how to deal with others ,how to take care of themselves and even the culture environment can make the students improve themselves. And on the other hand  , they could easily find jobs and get higher pay in the future career.

In the university  ,  the  most impressed experience maybe not the study in the lab ,but those culture activities ,the performance on the special festivals and the campus culture atmosphere .The most impressed thing in my memory is the first performance on the first Christmas's eve when I was a freshman in the university .I was the hostess to the performance .I was so excited and concentrated on the performance ,even that I forgot the nervousness .Though I made an oral mistake in the performance ,I really got the precious opportunity to show myself ,and I felt the encourage from the audiences and the confidence and courage were greatly improved by this performance.

And then talking to the most important task , I believe ,is always the study in the university .A perfect grade will help to find the most suitable job ,and also the important element to have influence on the admission to the graduate school .Working hard will set a strength basis for the future .The advanced equipment in the lab , the comfortable environment on the campus, the most pioneering technology and the convenient facilities ,all of them ,will create the most wonderful environment for the study .I major in the electronics engineer ,when talking about the most advanced  technology ,I have deep experience .The university provide the most advanced equipment for us to make experiments .And the expense of those facilities is very high and the university also provide the competition to stimulate the creating ability for us students to make the small scale electronics production .The knowledge in the class and the practice experiences both help us students to get more advanced knowledge and improve the practical ability.

And within the cooperation in the classmates and the colleagues in the students union , I get some experiences to deal with the relationship between different people and the ability to figure out some problems .Before the university the environment for most students is relatively single formation that is the school-home ,or maybe the school-home-part time job formation .After the university life ,the more people involve in the daily life ,such as the adviser, the room-maters ,the colleague ,and some others .During the process to deal with more people ,I feel the social experiences is very important .And with the experiences  d in the university I can get easier to suit the future social job.

The university is the classroom giving the advanced knowledge , the university is the stage providing the opportunity to show self ,and attending the university will become precious experience for people.