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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

When I was 18 , a high school student , most of my classmate got partime job or fulltime job during summer break or winter break . all of them are earned money and covered tuition when they back to school and told their friends what’s happened when they were working. I think have a job is not bad for teenagers while they are still student. The reasons are just following

First of all , it is a valuable experience for the student because the competition of enroll univercity and find a job which stable and have high incoming are increasingly competitive.  As a modern society, we need more talents who must be experienced lots of frustrations , a job may be one of frustrations of a teenager.  For example,I got a first part time job when I was 19 and I was a seller In a company, I didn’t know anything about this area, I just following the other sellers whom has more experience, but after two month I would handle any problem which occur on my job. Later I enrolled into marketing apartment of my university .

On the other , a job is a another beneficial resource to make friends for student. A teenage get a job maybe is a first time to contact with society. since most of them are not have experience on society. So these student are more eager to make new friend whom can help them to conquer the difficulty. And at this time, to have job, is a opportunity , to make friend not only help you in job but also in career and study .

Above all, working is preferable way to grow faster for teenagers than whom haven’t.

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