[讨论]Ai 46

今天写了一篇文章，觉得挺难的，请大家帮忙给点意见！谢谢！

另外大家觉得考试时候这么写有几分？

62 What education fails to teach us is to see the
human community as one. Rather than focus on the unique differences that
seperate one nation from another, education should focus on the similarities
among all people and places on Earth.

Should education concentrate on the similarities
rather than differences of humankind? While I admit
that learning about unity is essential for us, it does not necessarily mean
that we have to shift focus away from the differences. Education should serve
the functions of introducing both aspects on grounds of the following reasons.

On one hand, education should help us to be
comfortable about the unique differences, namely religious, ethnic or cultural
ones, so that we try to respect and tolerate the various characteristics of
others. We can all remember the days when we were too young to understand why
the people we encountered are so different from us. The ideas may have occurred
to us that anything different from ourselves’ are unacceptable because our own
habits or ways of dealing with problems are superior to others'. Conflicts
result. Then we struggle to solve the problems and attempt to recognize that
all the differences are valuable resources that will help us to grow up and
learn more about people around us and the world, rather than resources of
problems that cause confrontations among people. Only until then do we realize
that understanding the differences are so essential for us to respect others
and tolerate.

On the other, our schools should also teach us to recognize
similarities in order that we have a will to cooperate with each other and
fulfill the unanimous dreams of man-kind. No one can deny that there is only
one earth and all the human-beings are living under the same sky. Thus, it is
safe to say we share the same hope and goal-- to make the world a better place
to live in--to improve productivity as well as protecting the environment.
Bearing these ends in mind, people from different countries, various races and diversified
background will manage to get together and let our dreams come true. Without
knowing the similarities, we can hardly realize some of the serious difficulties
right in front of us, such as wars, pollutions and drugs, and then remaining
vulnerable to these uncertain factors in the world.

All
in all, to achieve a better and more harmonious world, education should teach us
to grasp fully the differences and similarities among individuals. Ignoring either
one of the two factors is not advisable and will lead us to narrow vision or
biased opinion. So our schools can and should promote both kinds of
understanding by way of balanced approach.