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The college years are the best time in a person's life?

Though there seems lots of memorable time in a person's life, say, childhood and teenager years, I deem the college years as my best time. Since I benefit a lot during my four-year university life from my teachers, my classmates and the entire campus environment. As a graduation recently, I find out that the four-year study advanced me to make the biggest progress within my ability and thus achieve more.

For one thing, the stuff of my college are all well-educated and of many remarkable characters. Take my supervisor, Professor Wang- an arduous expert on the region of management as an example. Though being regarded as one of the most dedicated researcher with a multitude of professional publications, he is so humble and friendly to almost everybody, especially to his students. Once I was confused about my choice on selective courses, Professor Wang-such a warmhearted person spent approximately one hour on analyze which class is suitable to me according to my interest and advantage. His patience and considerate talk strongly impressed me. Not only I benefit from his advices, but his kind personality set up a good example for me to follow. There are also a variety of other academic teachers whose specialities may vary while probably possesses the similar qualities as Professor Wang does. It is just because of the high-qualified staff that my college life became meaningful and salutary.
 
Furthermore, I have made quite a few life-long friends during my college years. Unlike those acquaintances I had in the period of my childhood, most of them are independent and outstanding.  By living and learning together, we share our interest and learn from each other as well. I can't forget the moment we discussed the global military situation seriously, the moment we played amusing beach ball near the seashore, the moment we received the diplomas from our headmaster together and so forth. These cherish memory curve in my heart and form a admirably beautiful picture of my college life.

In addition, I'm fairly grateful for the college to provide such a harmonious circumstance, especially proper to education. The library, the gym and the computer rooms all facilitate our study. Only with the aid of this environment can we accumulate knowledge systematically and efficiently. As to me, I was invariably stimulated to study by the incentives of classrooms full of industrious students who were immersing themselves into academic books. Such sight cannot be easily discovered outside the campus.
 
I believe there exits other valuable periods during a person’s whole life and the college years are only one part of one's life. Nevertheless, based on my own experience, I should say that the college years are the most worthwhile because during these years, I finished the change from an ignorant child to a mature adult. I learned a lot and enlarged my friend cycle. In conclusion, the college years are my most cherish fortunes in my life.