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发表于 2006-11-28 20:42:00 | 只看该作者

[原创]第二篇 twe185之185篇 请大家拍砖

A house or a business, I think this is a problem which people always bump into consider, this puzzle is the much debated one in that it can affect everybody in their daily lives. There are many people who think a house is better, but others prefer to business. If I facing with this issue, I would   probably choose business. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

No issue is more important now than that being a entrepreneur can benefit other people. If I have a company, I have to employ others to working for me. So, I can create opportunity of job for a lot of people. Today, finding a job is more and more difficult, many students can’t find job when they graduate from the college or university. At the same time, many unskilled works are fired. So, if I have a company, not only had I job for myself, but also settle others’ problem. by having a company, I will pay taxes to the government, in this way I contribute to the whole society. It is the company that gives me the responsibility to the society.

Additionally, owning a company, I will earn more money. It is true that a house is a valuable   possession, business, however, If being managed carefully, can even make me a millionaire, which can allow me to provide a better for my parents. So business is more attractive to me.

Finally, owning a company and being a boss is always my dream, even when I was a little girl. I eagerly want to have a successful life which the business can bring me. Besides, I don’t like being controlled by our people, so being the boss of myself will be my best choice.   

To sum up, a house gives me safety, a company gives me success. So, I choose the company.    
沙发
发表于 2006-12-1 16:19:00 | 只看该作者
最后一段的字特大,让偶一眼瞄到。最后那句就不好。其他还没看
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