作文成绩5。0，用的最老醉旧的魔板

5。30号考的，昨天刚刚收到寄来的成绩。作文5。0，不高，但是已经偷笑了，因为。。。

我用的是新东方最古老完全没有任何改变的魔板。。。就是那个：（copy一下山峰的帖子）

Argument In this argument the author reaches the conclusion that.... The basis for this recommendation is that.... An additional reason given in support of this recommendation is that...(The author cites...as an example in support of this recommendation). At first glance, the author's argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that it omits some important concerns that should be addressed to substantiate the argument. In the first place, In the second place, In the third place, In conclusion, the author fails to provide adequate justification for.... As it stands, the reasoning does not constitute a logical argument in favor of the recommendation. To strengthen the argument, the author would have to provide evidence to prove that.... To better assess the argument, we need additional detailed information about...so that we can establish the conclusion whether....

 Issue The issue of whether...is a complex and controversial one. Different people hold different views due to their respective angles. On the one hand, as is well-known and has often been advocated, ...; on the other hand, others probably insist that.... We do not have to look very far to see the valid standpoint of this matter. In the following analysis, I would like to reason and provide evidence favoring the former one and refuting the latter one. (The complex nature of the above issue requires us to consider it on a case-by-case basis. In my point of view, whether one has advantages over the other depends on the specific circumstances.) In the first place, the important reason that can be presented to develop my position is that.... A good example may be found in the case that.... Under this circumstance/therefore, it is obvious that.... In addition, there is another reason for me to choose the former statement/consider the latter statement to be wrong. The reason is not far to seek:.... To illustrate, a case in point in this respect is that.... Admittedly, there is no denying that...in some conditions. As we know, .... However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient support to.... (When...of X and Y are carefully compared, the most striking conclusion is obvious. To sum up, while...may be true in exceptional cases, I agree that....) Consequently, I advocate that..., because: (1) ...; (2) .... Due to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we may safely arrive at the conclusion I support.

本来作文就一般，但是这次考试主要是要提高语文的分数，所以完全没有花时间看作文。让男朋友帮忙写个魔板他也不愿意，因为“高手都不用魔板，林场发挥才好。“ 宁愿天天给我做饭和当其他部分的 tutor。

于是一气之下破罐子破摔就用了完全没有改动的魔板，花了半天时间看了看孙远的提纲。收到信的时候就抱着2。0 +的成绩，竟然发现结果出人意料，5。0。 呵呵。满足了。

当然高手还是继续发挥和写很牛的魔板了。这里就是告诉一下跟我一样的懒虫们，用原始魔板不会一定死的。

反正中间自己编了几个事实的例子，都是胡编的，比如什么深圳的发展什么的。可能这里搞了点分。

当然我有个朋友之前考也是用了魔板，但是不是原始的这个，是另外一个，很长的，全部套用，写了特别多字，才拿了2。0+。 估计是自己的内容太少了。希望大家都好运气。

加油~！！！