ChaseDream
搜索
返回列表 发新帖
查看: 1531|回复: 3
打印 上一主题 下一主题

[求助]习作123,请nn指教!

[复制链接]
楼主
发表于 2006-5-7 12:07:00 | 只看该作者

[求助]习作123,请nn指教!

123:
We all read a lot of books in our daily life. It is crucial for us to choose good and right books to read because people are influenced considerately by the books the like. Therefore, many people feel that the only books people should read are those about real events, real people and established facts. In fact, I think that people should read some of those books for they are good for people to get some real information about our lives. However, I disagree with the opinion. I believe people should read many kinds of different books they are interested in. I will prove my argument as following.
I agree that it is good and useful for people to read some books relevant to real events and real life. People can have a knowledge of the real world when reading these books. In addition, people can absorb different cultures and opinions. Therefore, reading those kinds of books is necessary for people.
It is also good and useful for people to read some books differing from our real lives. People also can read some fiction or imaginary story books in leisure time. If a person is interested in reading some fictions, he should just read these books for his interesting. Accordingly, people can read any kinds of books they love to read because people are reading for fun sometimes.
Last but not least, reading some books about unreal events can enhance people’s imagination. One famous scientist said that imagination is far more important than knowledge. When people put their time to read some fictional or imaginary books, they can learn something new from the books. So, people should read what they love to read.
In conclusion, all kinds of books have its own value for people to read. If people can get something useful and funny from the books, they should go to read these kinds of books. Reading is not only to gain knowledge but also to entertain the people.
31分钟,大概超时1分钟左右。感觉写得很平庸。请大家看看有什么问题。个人觉得缺有力的论据,并且预言缺乏多样性!可是具体什么问题请大家指出!
沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2006-5-7 13:02:00 | 只看该作者
123. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
自己改正了一下,如下。请各位看看还有没有什么不足。
We all read a lot of books in our daily life. It is crucial for us to choose good and right books to read because people are influenced considerately by the books they like to read. But what kinds of books should people read in their spear time? When facing the question, many people feel that the sorts of books people should read are those about real events, real people and established facts. In fact, I think that people should read these kinds of books for the books are good for people to get some real information about our lives. However, I disagree with the opinion. I believe people should read various kinds of books they are interested in. I will prove my argument in the following.
To begin with, I agree that it is good and useful for people to read some books relevant to real events and real life. People can have knowledge of the real world when reading these books. For example, people can know about real history from history books. In addition, people can absorb different cultures and opinions inside the books. Therefore, reading those kinds of books is necessary for people.
Next, it is also helpful for people to read some books differing from our real lives. People also can read some fiction or imaginary story books in leisure time. If a person is interested in reading some fictions, he should just read these books for his interesting. Accordingly, people can read any kinds of books they love to read because people are reading for fun sometimes.
Last but not least, reading some books about unreal events can enhance people’s imagination. One famous and great scientist Einstein said that imagination is far more important than knowledge. When people put their spare time to read some fictional or imaginary books, they can learn something new or lots of fresh conception from the books. Some scientists bring out the great science perception originating from the scientific fictions they read in childhood. Consequently, people should read what they love to read.
In conclusion, all kinds of books have their own value for people to read. If people can get something useful and funny from the books, they should go to read the books. Furthermore, people ought to gain diversification of lore and information by reading large varieties of books. In my view, reading is not only to gain knowledge but also for entertainment.
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2006-5-7 20:00:00 | 只看该作者
请各位版主看看啊!!!
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2006-5-7 22:31:00 | 只看该作者
大家帮忙看看啊!!!!!!!!!!
您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 立即注册

Mark一下! 看一下! 顶楼主! 感谢分享! 快速回复:

所属分类: TOEFL / IELTS

近期活动

正在浏览此版块的会员 ()

手机版|ChaseDream|GMT+8, 2025-9-27 20:10
京公网安备11010202008513号 京ICP证101109号 京ICP备12012021号

ChaseDream 论坛

© 2003-2025 ChaseDream.com. All Rights Reserved.

返回顶部