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Day33
1.(71)Paperproduction accounts for approximately 40 percent of the world's industrial useof wood, and the market for paper isgrowing faster than it is for all major wood products.
(A) the market forpaper is growing faster than it is for all
(B) the market forpaper is growing faster than the market for all other
(C) the market forit is growing faster than it is for all other
(D) its market isgrowing faster than the market for all
(E) its market isgrowing faster than it is for all other
B



2.(72)Broccolithrives in moderate to cool climates and propagatedby seeds, either sown directly in the field or in plant beds designed forproducing transplants.
(A) propagated by seeds, eithersown directly in the field or in plant beds designed for producing
(B) propagated by seeds, sowneither directly in the field or sownin plant beds designed so as to produce
(C) is propagated by seeds eithersown directly in the field or in plant beds designed so that they produce
(D) is propagated by seeds sowneither directly in the field or in plant beds designed to produce
(E) is propagated by seeds, sowneither directly in the field or sownin plant beds designed for producing
  
  
  
主谓一致/句子结构
  
  
平行
  
  
修饰/比较
  
  
代词/指代
  
  
有效性和简洁性
  
  
语义逻辑
  
  
A
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
B
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
C
  
  
  
  
either sown directly in the field or in plant…结构不平行
  
  
  
  
they 没有指代
  
  
designed so that they produce 结
  
构复杂,且 they  没有指代
  
  
  
  
D✔
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
E❓
  
纠结选项
  
  
  
  
sown either directly in the field or sown in 结构不平行
  
  
  
  
  
  
for producing 表示目的不如  to
  
produce 表示目的有效
  
  
  




3.(73)Evolutionarypsychology holds that the humanmind is not a "blank slate," but instead that it comprisesspecialized mental mechanisms that were developed as a way of solving specific problems human ancestorsfaced millions of years ago.
(A) the human mindis not a "blank slate," but instead that it comprises specializedmental mechanisms that were developed as a way of solving
(B) the human mindis not a "blank slate" but instead comprises specialized mentalmechanisms that were developed to solve
(C) the human mind,instead of a "blank slate," it comprises specialized mentalmechanisms that have been developed to solve
(D) rather than itbeing a "blank slate," the human mind comprises specialized mentalmechanisms that have been developed as a way of solving
(E) rather than thehuman mind's being a "blank slate," that it comprises specializedmental mechanisms that were developed as a way of solving
B



4.(74)PaleontologistStephen Jay Gould has argued that many biological traits are not the productsof natural selection, favored due totheir enhancement of reproduction or survival, but that they are simply random by-products of otherevolutionary developments.
(A) due to theirenhancement of reproduction or survival, but thatthey are
(B) due to the reproduction or survival they enhance, but theyare
(C) because they enhancereproduction or survival, but
(D) because they enhancereproduction or survival, but are
(E) because of enhancingreproduction or survival, but are
  
  
  
主谓一致/句子结构
  
  
平行
  
  
修饰/比较
  
  
代词/指代
  
  
有效性和简洁性
  
  
语义逻辑
  
  
A
  
  
  
  
not…but…连接的结构不平行
  
  
  
  
  
  
due to +动词的抽象名词形式,表达不够有效
  
  
  
  
B
  
  
  
  
they 多余,破  坏 了 sth/sb be not… but
  
(be)…的结构
  
  
  
  
  
  
due to +动词的抽象名词形式,表达不够有效
  
  
  
  
C
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
but 可能作为介词,产生  because they enhance  reproduction or survival, but simply random
  
by-products 的歧意
  
  
D✔
  
  
  
  
but are 表明了  but 在这里只能作为连词,构成 be not… but (be)…的平行结构
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
E
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
because of +动名词形式,表达不够有效
  
  
  





5.(75)Beneaththe soil of the Malheur National Forest in eastern Oregon, a fungus has for centuries been slowly weaving itsway through the roots of trees, to become the largest living single organism known to humans.
(A) has forcenturies been slowly weaving its way through the roots of trees, to become
(B) has slowly wovenits way through the roots of trees for centuries, and so becoming
(C) that has beenslowly weaving its way through the roots of trees for centuries has become
(D) that has forcenturies slowly woven its way through the roots of trees and has become
(E) that, havingslowly woven its way through the roots of trees for centuries, to become
C



6.(76)Byrecording the noise of crinkled wrappers as they were slowly stretched out inan otherwise silent chamber, and then digitizingand analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found thenoise not continuousbut consisted of individual bursts or pops just thousandths of a second long.
(A) digitizing andanalyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found thenoise not
(B) digitizing andanalyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found that thenoise was not
(C) digitizing andanalyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found thenoise not to be
(D) the soundemissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists foundthat the noise was not
(E) the soundemissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists foundthe noise not to be
B



7.(77)Scientistshave found signs that moving water changed the chemical makeup of the surfaceof Mars in recent eras,therefore concluding that its crust is harboring up to three times as muchwater than was previouslythought.
(A) eras, therefore concluding that its crust isharboring up to three times as much water thanwas
(B) eras, therefore concluding that the planet's crustharbors up to three times as much water or more aswas
(C) eras and have therefore concluded that theplanet's crust harbors up to three times as muchwater as
(D) eras and they have concluded, therefore, that itscrust harbors up to three times as much water, ormore, than
(E) eras and concluded, therefore, that the planet'scrust is harboring up to three times more water aswas
  
  
  
主谓一致/句子结构
  
  
平行
  
  
修饰/比较
  
  
代词/指代
  
  
有效性和简洁性
  
  
语义逻辑
  
  
A
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
B❓
  
纠结选项
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
C✔
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
D
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
E
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  





8.(78)The cottontailrabbit population in Orange County, California, has increased unchecked inrecent years as a result of the removalof the native fox population and the clearing of surrounding woodlands.
(A) years as aresult of the removal of
(B) years as aresult of removing
(C) years, resultingfrom the removing of
(D) years, which isa result of removing
(E) years, which isa result of the removal of
  
  
  
主谓一致/句子结构
  
  
平行
  
  
修饰/比较
  
  
代词/指代
  
  
有效性和简洁性
  
  
语义逻辑
  
  
A✔
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
动词有自己的名词形式时,就不要用 the  +动词 ing 形式来表达其名词形式
  
  
  
  
B
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
as a result of 后面加动名词不好,且根据未划线部分  and the  clearing 判断出 as a result of 后 面应该是名词
  
  
  
  
C❓
  
纠结选项
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
removal 是 remove 的名词形式,因此不用 the  removing 表达 remove 的名词形式
  
  
  
  
D
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
which 不能指代句子。
  
  
removing 应该改为  the removal
  
  
  
  
E❓
  
纠结选项
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
which 不能指代句子。
  
  
  
  
  




9.(79)Changes in sea level are notonly a result of changes in water temperature, affecting water density,but ofmelting glaciers as well.
(A) arenot only a result of changes in water temperature, affecting water density, butof melting glaciers as well
(B) notonly result from changes in water temperature, which affect water density, butalso when glaciers melt
(C) area result not only of changes in water temperature, which affect water density,but also the melting glaciers
(D)result not only from changes in water temperature, which affect water density,but also from the melting of glaciers
(E)result from not only changes in water temperature, affecting water density, butas well as when glaciers melt
  
  
  
主谓一致/句子结构
  
  
平行
  
  
修饰/比较
  
  
代词/指代
  
  
有效性和简洁性
  
  
语义逻辑
  
  
A
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
B
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
C❓
  
纠结选项
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
D✔
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
E
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  





10. (80)In the major cities of industrialized countries atthe end of the nineteenth century, important public places such as theaters,restaurants, shops, and banks had installed electric lighting, but electricity was in lessthan one percent of homes, where lighting was still provided mainly by candles or gas.
(A) electricity was in less than one percent of homes, where lighting was still
(B) electricity was in less than one percent of homes and lighting still
(C) there were less than one percent of homes with electricity,where lighting was still being
(D) there was less than one percent of homes that had electricity,having lighting that was still
(E) less than one percent of homes had electricity, wherelighting had still been
  
  
  
主谓一致/句子结构
  
  
平行
  
  
修饰/比较
  
  
代词/指代
  
  
有效性和简洁性
  
  
语义逻辑
  
  
A✔
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
句子结构简洁;  where 就近修饰 homes,符合逻辑意思
  
  
B❓
  
纠结选项
  
  
and lighting still provided 省略了 was, 因为这里 was  作为助动词,而前一个并列句的  was
  
是系动词,功能不同,不能省略
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
C❓
  
纠结选项
  
  
  
  
  
  
where 语法上就近修饰  electricity,导致逻辑错误;  being 多余
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
D
  
  
  
  
  
  
having…修饰对象不清楚
  
  
was 应该改为 were,因为 one  percent of homes 是复数名词
  
  
  
  
  
  
E
  
  
  
  
  
  
where 语法上就近修饰 electricity,导致逻辑意思错误; had been 过去完成时态错误,“Had still been” 意味着在句子中提到的那个时候, 家里的照明已经不再使用蜡烛和煤气了(过去完成时意味着事件已经结束了, 尽管在某种程度上它仍然与当前的情况有关)。
  
  
  
  
  
  
  



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1.B
2.D
3.C 错B
it多余了,两个主语;改变句意,变成blank state本来compaises mental mechanisms了
4.C
5.C
6.A错B
宾语从句不省略that
7.C
8.A
9.D
10.A
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1.(71)Paper production accounts for approximately 40 percent of the world's industrial use of wood, and the market for paper is growing faster than it is for all major wood products.
(A) the market for paper is growing faster than it is for all
(B) the market for paper is growing faster than the market for all other
(C) the market for it is growing faster than it is for all other
(D) its market is growing faster than the market for all
(E) its market is growing faster than it is for all other

2.(72)Broccoli thrives in moderate to cool climates and propagated by seeds, either sown directly in the field or in plant beds designed for producing transplants.
(A) propagated by seeds, either sown directly in the field or in plant beds designed for producing
(B) propagated by seeds, sown either directly in the field or sown in plant beds designed so as to produce
(C) is propagated by seeds either sown directly in the field or in plant beds designed so that they produce
(D) is propagated by seeds sown either directly in the field or in plant beds designed to produce
(E) is propagated by seeds, sown either directly in the field or sown in plant beds designed for producing

3.(73)Evolutionary psychology holds that the human mind is not a "blank slate," but instead that it comprises specialized mental mechanisms that were developed as a way of solving specific problems human ancestors faced millions of years ago.
(A) the human mind is not a "blank slate," but instead that it comprises specialized mental mechanisms that were developed as a way of solving
(B) the human mind is not a "blank slate" but instead comprises specialized mental mechanisms that were developed to solve
(C) the human mind, instead of a "blank slate," it comprises specialized mental mechanisms that have been developed to solve
(D) rather than it being a "blank slate," the human mind comprises specialized mental mechanisms that have been developed as a way of solving
(E) rather than the human mind's being a "blank slate," that it comprises specialized mental mechanisms that were developed as a way of solving

4.(74)Paleontologist Stephen Jay Gould has argued that many biological traits are not the products of natural selection, favored due to their enhancement of reproduction or survival, but that they are simply random by-products of other evolutionary developments.
(A) due to their enhancement of reproduction or survival, but that they are
(B) due to the reproduction or survival they enhance, but they are
(C) because they enhance reproduction or survival, but
(D) because they enhance reproduction or survival, but are
(E) because of enhancing reproduction or survival, but are

5.(75)Beneath the soil of the Malheur National Forest in eastern Oregon, a fungus has for centuries been slowly weaving its way through the roots of trees, to become the largest living single organism known to humans.
(A) has for centuries been slowly weaving its way through the roots of trees, to become
(B) has slowly woven its way through the roots of trees for centuries, and so becoming
(C) that has been slowly weaving its way through the roots of trees for centuries has become
(D) that has for centuries slowly woven its way through the roots of trees and has become
(E) that, having slowly woven its way through the roots of trees for centuries, to become

6.(76)By recording the noise of crinkled wrappers as they were slowly stretched out in an otherwise silent chamber, and then digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not continuous but consisted of individual bursts or pops just thousandths of a second long.
(A) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not
(B) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(C) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to benot to be continos but consisted不平行
(D) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(E) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be

7.(77)Scientists have found signs that moving water changed the chemical makeup of the surface of Mars in recent eras, therefore concluding that its crust is harboring up to three times as much water than was previously thought.
(A) eras, therefore concluding that its crust is harboring up to three times as much water than was
(B) eras, therefore concluding that the planet's crust harbors up to three times as much water or more as was
(C) eras and have therefore concluded that the planet's crust harbors up to three times as much water as
(D) eras and they have concluded, therefore, that its crust harbors up to three times as much water, or more, than
(E) eras and concluded, therefore, that the planet's crust is harboring up to three times more water as was

8.(78)The cottontail rabbit population in Orange County, California, has increased unchecked in recent years as a result of the removal of the native fox population and the clearing of surrounding woodlands.
(A) years as a result of the removal of
(B) years as a result of removing
(C) years, resulting from the removing of
(D) years, which is a result of removing
(E) years, which is a result of the removal of

9. (79)Changes in sea level are not only a result of changes in water temperature, affecting water density,but of melting glaciers as well.
(A) are not only a result of changes in water temperature, affecting water density, but of melting glaciers as well
(B) not only result from changes in water temperature, which affect water density, but also when glaciers melt
(C) are a result not only of changes in water temperature, which affect water density, but also the melting glaciers
(D) result not only from changes in water temperature, which affect water density, but also from the melting of glaciers
(E) result from not only changes in water temperature, affecting water density, but as well as when glaciers melt

10. (80)In the major cities of industrialized countries at the end of the nineteenth century, important public places such as theaters, restaurants, shops, and banks had installed electric lighting, but electricitywas in less than one percent of homes, where lighting was still provided mainly by candles or gas.
(A) electricity was in less than one percent of homes, where lighting was still
(B) electricity was in less than one percent of homes and lighting still
(C) there were less than one percent of homes with electricity, where lighting was still being
where就近修饰,being - redundancy
(D) there was less than one percent of homes that had electricity, having lighting that was still
(E) less than one percent of homes had electricity, where lighting had still been


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