Day33 1.(71)Paperproduction accounts for approximately 40 percent of the world's industrial useof wood, and the market for paper isgrowing faster than it is for all major wood products. (A) the market forpaper is growing faster than it is for all (B) the market forpaper is growing faster than the market for all other (C) the market forit is growing faster than it is for all other (D) its market isgrowing faster than the market for all (E) its market isgrowing faster than it is for all other B
2.(72)Broccolithrives in moderate to cool climates and propagatedby seeds, either sown directly in the field or in plant beds designed forproducing transplants. (A) propagated by seeds, eithersown directly in the field or in plant beds designed for producing (B) propagated by seeds, sowneither directly in the field or sownin plant beds designed so as to produce (C) is propagated by seeds eithersown directly in the field or in plant beds designed so that they produce (D) is propagated by seeds sowneither directly in the field or in plant beds designed to produce (E) is propagated by seeds, sowneither directly in the field or sownin plant beds designed for producing
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| either sown directly in the field or in plant…结构不平行 |
| they 没有指代 | designed so that they produce 结 构复杂,且 they 没有指代 |
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3.(73)Evolutionarypsychology holds that the humanmind is not a "blank slate," but instead that it comprisesspecialized mental mechanisms that were developed as a way of solving specific problems human ancestorsfaced millions of years ago. (A) the human mindis not a "blank slate," but instead that it comprises specializedmental mechanisms that were developed as a way of solving (B) the human mindis not a "blank slate" but instead comprises specialized mentalmechanisms that were developed to solve (C) the human mind,instead of a "blank slate," it comprises specialized mentalmechanisms that have been developed to solve (D) rather than itbeing a "blank slate," the human mind comprises specialized mentalmechanisms that have been developed as a way of solving (E) rather than thehuman mind's being a "blank slate," that it comprises specializedmental mechanisms that were developed as a way of solving B
4.(74)PaleontologistStephen Jay Gould has argued that many biological traits are not the productsof natural selection, favored due totheir enhancement of reproduction or survival, but that they are simply random by-products of otherevolutionary developments. (A) due to theirenhancement of reproduction or survival, but thatthey are (B) due to the reproduction or survival they enhance, but theyare (C) because they enhancereproduction or survival, but (D) because they enhancereproduction or survival, but are (E) because of enhancingreproduction or survival, but are
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| they 多余,破 坏 了 sth/sb be not… but (be)…的结构 |
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| but 可能作为介词,产生 because they enhance reproduction or survival, but simply random by-products 的歧意 | D✔ |
| but are 表明了 but 在这里只能作为连词,构成 be not… but (be)…的平行结构 |
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5.(75)Beneaththe soil of the Malheur National Forest in eastern Oregon, a fungus has for centuries been slowly weaving itsway through the roots of trees, to become the largest living single organism known to humans. (A) has forcenturies been slowly weaving its way through the roots of trees, to become (B) has slowly wovenits way through the roots of trees for centuries, and so becoming (C) that has beenslowly weaving its way through the roots of trees for centuries has become (D) that has forcenturies slowly woven its way through the roots of trees and has become (E) that, havingslowly woven its way through the roots of trees for centuries, to become C
6.(76)Byrecording the noise of crinkled wrappers as they were slowly stretched out inan otherwise silent chamber, and then digitizingand analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found thenoise not continuousbut consisted of individual bursts or pops just thousandths of a second long. (A) digitizing andanalyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found thenoise not (B) digitizing andanalyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found that thenoise was not (C) digitizing andanalyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found thenoise not to be (D) the soundemissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists foundthat the noise was not (E) the soundemissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists foundthe noise not to be B
7.(77)Scientistshave found signs that moving water changed the chemical makeup of the surfaceof Mars in recent eras,therefore concluding that its crust is harboring up to three times as muchwater than was previouslythought. (A) eras, therefore concluding that its crust isharboring up to three times as much water thanwas (B) eras, therefore concluding that the planet's crustharbors up to three times as much water or more aswas (C) eras and have therefore concluded that theplanet's crust harbors up to three times as muchwater as (D) eras and they have concluded, therefore, that itscrust harbors up to three times as much water, ormore, than (E) eras and concluded, therefore, that the planet'scrust is harboring up to three times more water aswas
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8.(78)The cottontailrabbit population in Orange County, California, has increased unchecked inrecent years as a result of the removalof the native fox population and the clearing of surrounding woodlands. (A) years as aresult of the removal of (B) years as aresult of removing (C) years, resultingfrom the removing of (D) years, which isa result of removing (E) years, which isa result of the removal of
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| removal 是 remove 的名词形式,因此不用 the removing 表达 remove 的名词形式 |
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| which 不能指代句子。 | removing 应该改为 the removal |
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9.(79)Changes in sea level are notonly a result of changes in water temperature, affecting water density,but ofmelting glaciers as well. (A) arenot only a result of changes in water temperature, affecting water density, butof melting glaciers as well (B) notonly result from changes in water temperature, which affect water density, butalso when glaciers melt (C) area result not only of changes in water temperature, which affect water density,but also the melting glaciers (D)result not only from changes in water temperature, which affect water density,but also from the melting of glaciers (E)result from not only changes in water temperature, affecting water density, butas well as when glaciers melt
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10. (80)In the major cities of industrialized countries atthe end of the nineteenth century, important public places such as theaters,restaurants, shops, and banks had installed electric lighting, but electricity was in lessthan one percent of homes, where lighting was still provided mainly by candles or gas. (A) electricity was in less than one percent of homes, where lighting was still (B) electricity was in less than one percent of homes and lighting still (C) there were less than one percent of homes with electricity,where lighting was still being (D) there was less than one percent of homes that had electricity,having lighting that was still (E) less than one percent of homes had electricity, wherelighting had still been
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| where 语法上就近修饰 electricity,导致逻辑错误; being 多余 |
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| having…修饰对象不清楚 | was 应该改为 were,因为 one percent of homes 是复数名词 |
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| where 语法上就近修饰 electricity,导致逻辑意思错误; had been 过去完成时态错误,“Had still been” 意味着在句子中提到的那个时候, 家里的照明已经不再使用蜡烛和煤气了(过去完成时意味着事件已经结束了, 尽管在某种程度上它仍然与当前的情况有关)。 |
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