OG19-764

djfslhcjdslv · 发表于 2021-9-9 16:05:59

The 19-year-old pianist and composer performed his most recent work all over Europe, Asia, and North America last year, winning prestigious awards in both London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he is hoping to continue composing now that he has returned to Chicago.
A. winning prestigious awards in both London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he is hoping
B. winning prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age, and hoping
C. having won prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, hoping
D. winning prestigious awards in both London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age, and he hopes
E. having won prestigious awards both in London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he hopes

OG关于C选项解释说 The present-perfect participial phrase having won suggests that his winning took place before his performance tour.是为什么啊，performed用了一过，having won用了现完，为什么现完的时间发生在一过之前啊？

求大神解答！

长丝弓 · 发表于 2021-9-9 20:31:11

这里having won，是分词短语加have，不能说是现在完成时

关于此题，GmatLa的大神是这样分析的：

选项分析：

A选项：both…and…为习惯表达，不能用both + as well as。

B选项：并列连词and身后的ing短语hoping to continue composing now that he has returned to Chicago在and身前没有平行对象。注意，此处的winning和hoping不能平行。这是因为and身前的逗号将winning prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age变成了插入语（两端的逗号隔开了这个短语和主句）。
另外，both…and…具有平行错误。只能说both in London and in Tokyo。

C选项：both…and…具有平行错误同(B)。另外，having won应改为winning。在分词短语中加have表示先时性，在逻辑上，不可能win这个动作先发生于perform。

D选项：Correct. 本选项在逻辑和语法上均是正确的。

E选项：both的习语错误同(A)；having won错误同(C)。

djfslhcjdslv · 发表于 2021-9-9 21:56:02

1.”在分词短语中加have表示先时性”，这里面的先时性是说加了having的就排在其它句子时态的前面吗？
2.”此处的winning和hoping不能平行”，但是OG中关于B 项的解释是说hoping和winning是平行的，所以这怎么说？
B Because hoping is parallel with winning, it suggests that the hoping and winning are contemporaneous, whereas in fact the musician won his awards last year but is now, in the present, upon his return, hoping
to contmue composmg.

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