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When drafting the Declaration ofSentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in itby the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
(A) When drafting the Declaration ofSentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in itby the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement. (B) Including a call for femaleenfranchisement, a draft of the Declaration of Sentiments was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's RightsConvention in 1848 that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote. (C) When the Declaration of Sentimentsdrafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Convention in 1848,a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it. (D) A call for female enfranchisement,included in Elizabeth Cady Stanton's draft of the Declaration of Sentiments in 1848, thatwas adopted by the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention. (E) WhenElizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adoptedat the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in1848, she included in it a call for female enfranchisement.
考点:句子结构（Grammatical Construction）、逻辑表达（Logical Predication） 1) 修饰成分应该尽量靠近修饰对象 2) 逗号+ -ed形容词的结构中, -ed形容词从语法上修饰的是逗号前最后一个名词 3) 分词短语在句首起状语作用,逻辑主语等于句子主语
(A) when drafting…结构中缺乏逻辑主语; included…结构中缺乏句子主语 应该在included之前加
上一个what用来做was a call的主语; 即使上面两个问题修改后,句子结构仍然复杂,笨拙.
(B) that从句离修饰对象a draft太远, 给人感觉that从句修饰的是Convention; 整个句子结构笨拙
(C) 原句中没有标志表明要用过去完成时; a call for female enfranchisement had been included
in it.使用被动语态无法表示出施动者是谁,并且it指代模糊
(D) 整个句子缺乏谓语成分; included从语法上修饰enfranchisement, 而从逻辑上应该A call
(E) 正确, when连接完整的句子,that从句紧靠修饰对象,句子结构清晰,用词简洁
求问C用过去完成时哪里有问题？前面不是有指出具体的过去的时间When the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Convention in 1848来着？
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