【求大神】og1560

Dreamout · 发表于 2017-3-7 11:47:08

20、（OG1560）The Olympic Games helped to keep peace amongthe pugnacious states of the Greek world in that a sacred truce wasproclaimed during the festival's month.

A worldin that a sacred truce was proclaimed during thefestival's month

B world, proclaiming a sacred truce during the festival's month

C worldwhen they proclaimed a sacred truce for thefestival month

D world, for a sacred truce was proclaimed during the month ofthe festival

E worldby proclamation of a sacred truce that was forthe month of the festival

求问大神们觉得E为什么错？除了that was多余以外。

Fiona09 · 发表于 2017-3-7 13:35:32

by后面应该加动作的发出者，through后面才应该加方式方法

百嗑全输 · 发表于 2017-3-8 00:22:45

E的话虽然表达对了意思但因果关系不明显。另外按照前一句的结构by后面应该加主语的动作，但proclaim并不是主语的动作

Dreamout · 发表于 2017-3-8 09:40:41

百嗑全输发表于 2017-3-8 00:22
E的话虽然表达对了意思但因果关系不明显。另外按照前一句的结构by后面应该加主语的动作，但proclaim并不是 ...

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【求大神】og1560

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