OG里的一道SC题目，求解答。

学海无涯学学学 · 发表于 2016-7-16 23:54:58

According to recent studies comparing the nutritionalvalue of meat from wild animals and meat fromdomesticated animals, wild animals have less total (atthan do livestock fed on grain and more of a kind of fatthev think is good for cardiac health.

(A) wild animals have less total fat than do livestockfed on grain and more of a kind of fat they think is
(B) wild animals have less total fat than livestock fedon grain and more of a kind of fat thought to be
(C) wild animals have less total fat than that oflivestock fed on grain and have more fat of akind thought to be
(D) total fat of wild animals is less than livestockfed on grain and they have more fat of a kindthought to be
(E)  total fat is less in wild animals than that oflivestock fed on grain and more of their fat is ofa Kind they think is

正确答案是B，但是我觉得B里面的对比不知道是和fat比还是和animals比了，有点模糊
因此我觉得C选项是对的，并列也很工整，但是答案里说C选项wordy and awkward……所以感觉很纠结
下面是OG上的解释：

Logical predication; Rhetorical construction
The sentence reports research findings on thecomparison between the fat content o f wildanimals and that of domestic livestock. The mostsignificant error in the sentence is in the phrasethey think the pronoun they either lacks a referentor is meant to refer back to wild animals, whichwould be nonsensical.

A  The pronoun they fails to refer correctly.
B  Correct. The phrase thought to be eliminatesthe most significant error in the originalsentence. Note that while the phrase lesstotalfat than livestock differs from the phraseless totalf a t than do livestock in the original,cither would be correct here.
C  The resulting sentence is unnecessarilywordy and confusing. The pronoun that isnot only superfluous, but it fails to referback ro anything.
D  Tlie resulting sentence makes a nonsensicalcomparison between totalfat and livestock.
E  The resulting sentence is wordy andconfusing. It lacks the required parallelisminwildanimah."in livestock.The
referent o f the possessive pronoun their isambiguous, as is the referent of the pronounthey.

求解，谢谢。

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