想请朋友们评论一下这篇作文

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Good teachers are more important to a child's development than good parents.

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The statement says that good teachers are more important to a child's development than good parents. I disagree with it. I do think good parents are more important based on the following reasons.

Firstly, parents have more time to educate their children than teachers and thus a child can be influenced more greatly by good parents than by good teachers. A child stays at home for a few years, usually four to six years, before it goes to school. During these years, no teachers are in a child's life. Even after a child goes to school, teachers always focused on teaching academic knowledge. So good parents can teach a child more about good characters, good habits, etc. than good teachers. In addition, a child always likes to imitate others' behavior. Since more time is spent with parents, a child's behavior is more like parents' than teachers'. Good parents' behavior is a good example for a child.

Secondly, parents can spend more time on a child than teachers. Usually, parents have only one, two or three children in a family. On the contrary, there are many students in a school and teachers can spend only very limited time on a specific child. In addition, parents always hope their children to be excellent and they are proud of their children. They are willing to spend time on their children.

Of course, I admit that parents sometimes forgive their children's fault easily just because they love their children too much. However, I think good parents know how to teach their children what is good and what is bad and how to learn from lessons.

Based on the arguments above, my conclusion is obvious. Good parents are more important to a child's development than good teachers. This is also my own experience. I have had many good teachers who have influenced me much, but my parents have influenced more.

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Personally, I am afraid that it is at the most 4 score.   

这个题目好像不是出自185。

请问你觉得文章的问题主要在什么地方呢？怎样才能变成6分作文？是需要套用模板吗？

谢谢！