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发表于 2015-11-20 17:55:00 | 只看该作者
我觉得写得好好,我都不知道怎么改了Orz

Question:
Students must take a class in which they learn a practical skill. School administrators are trying to decide whether to hold a class in cooking, managing personal finances or auto repair. Which do you think the school should require students to take? Why?


When school administrators pose choices for students that everyone should take a practical skill class among cooking, managing personal finances and auto repair, I think students should learn cooking. The reasons why I am inclined to cooking are as follows.

To begin with, cooking is an essential skill that students should pick up. As the old saying goes that food is of paramount necessity to people, we usually have three meals a day. Note that serious food safety problems in China, the food hygiene is an issue deserved to be concerned. Canteens’ diets are often greasy and experience(?). What’s more, you cannot know if they use fresh materials and operate in clean ways. If you can do it yourself, there is no worry to be served with food in bad condition. Signifying your capacity of living independently and healthily, cooking is a prerequisite skill.

In addition, cuisine is art and art is worth to enjoy. In the process of learning cooking, you see a magic when different components react with each other. You hear a tune when the pork chop sizzles on a fiery griddle. You smell a scent when bread rises in the oven. There is a catchword on the internet: never disappoint love and delicacy. In my point of view, it is a fantastic gratification to do a dish which feasts both our eyes and stomach.

Moreover, it is a sweet gift that you cook a meal for your parents and friends. On occasions such as the Spring Festival and mid-autumn festival, you will surprise you family and ease their burden if you can help your eldership in kitchen. In the context that you are able to cook cute cupcakes or cookies through you culinary class, it is also a good choice for you when you don’t know what gift you can send to your friend. 

In a nutshell, cooking is an essential for life, an enjoyment for oneself and a pleasure for intimates. As a result, student should take a cooking lesson.
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 楼主| 发表于 2015-12-8 15:01:19 | 只看该作者
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Schools have always offered students three types of after-school activities.But due to recent limited budgets, they can only support one kind ofactivities. Which one would you choose? Why?

1.     sports
2.     arts
3.     volunteering(e.g. for the community)

Facing with restricted budgets, what kindof extracurricular activities should school offer? In my point of view, doingexercises is of vital importance to students’ life. My reasons are as follows.


First of all, homework and experimentreports are such considerable burden to students that they prefer sitting inthe classroom to study instead of going out to do some outdoor activities whenthey are free. Unfortunately, the neglect of exercise gives rise to higher andhigher fail ratio of physical education examination even though the passingscore is reducing year by year. To my concern, either study or work is based ona strong body so school should pay attention to students’ health state and theamount of exercise and support greatly students to do more sports.


Next, sports facility does not need alot of man material resource and money. If the school campus is big enough, afootball pitch or several basketball court are practicable plans because soccerand basketball are popular among the adolescent. What’s more, in view of girls’need, volleyball court can also be taken into consideration. Adversely, if thespace is limited, a single room is able to hold a number of chess players. Tabletennis tables cannot take up to much area. Given that all the facilities isbuilt outside, school can save gymnasium construction fee.


Last but not least, most popular sportsin campus are team works which can foster students’ team spirit. Take basketballfor the instance, basketball match is very common and each class shouldorganize a team. Boys, unfamiliar with each other, gather, play, have conflictand establish rapport and friendship. Sport is a magical and passionate thing indeedand maybe that is the reason why it is so attractive.


In a nutshell, sport is a necessary projectthat school should support.


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