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我不是NN哈 我是一只挣扎的学渣 但是觉得有东西可以分享 that在这里是对的 就是指代east to west 我说不出来具体的语法内容 因为我不太懂这些
我觉得关于pronoun这块 可以先不用纠结 做题时先关注大的关系。原句虽然表述不对，但是意思是很清楚的。
Hurricanes at first begin traveling from east to west, because that direction is the way the prevailing winds in the tropics blow, but they then veer off toward higher latitudes, in many cases changing direction toward the east before dissipating over the colder, more northerly waters or over land.
1.hurricanes at first travel from east to west
2.the direction is the way the prvailling winds below (modifier 解释的 why hurricanes travel from west to east )
3.they then veer off toward higher latitudes (转向高纬度）
hurricanes travel.....because .... but they then .....大概就是这个结构
所以就可以delete CDE了
具体来讲
(C) While hurricanes travel from east to west at first, the direction of the prevailing winds blowing in the tropics, and
and ??? 关系不对，明明是转折；并且and 前是个fragment 。the direction .......????
(D) Because hurricanes at first travel from east to west, since it is the direction of the prevailing winds in the tropics,
because hurricanes travel from esat to west ,they then veer off ???? 非常不合逻辑
(E) Hurricanes, beginning by traveling from east to west, because this is the direction of the prevailing winds in the tropics,they then veer off...
hurricanes ,because ........,they then veer off ?? delete !!!
然后再来看下AB
对比下AB 两个选项，就可以看到at first/ begin redundat
对于一个500来分的渣渣讲 不敢止步 在网上搜到了一个印度NN 的其他解释 我还挺喜欢的 （因为A 就是看着不顺眼，但不知道为什么 ）
Two issues:
1) "begin travelling" is wordy as we can replace with "travel". We need a simple present to make it parallel with "veer off" -> another simple present verb.觉得这一点讲的很合我心意
2) "is the way the prevailing winds in the tropics blow" -> is too wordy and can be easily replaced by construction in option B) 那个方向是盛行风吹得方向 这样看meaning 确实很wordy 直接说那是盛行风的方向即可
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