问思路：AI039

snowmary

39. “It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life.”

我看了题目自己先想了一个提纲，可是发现和讨论贴里的大家的思路都不一样～好像我对professional success的理解很大家的理解差挺远的～帮我看看我这样理解这个题目有没有什么问题吧

Agree: 1. To achieve professional success, one needs to spend a lot of time learning the related knowledge beforehand, so one would have to sacrifice much entertainment in the life. eg. Da Vinci

            2. To achieve professional success, one has to be dedicated in the field, so one would have to sacrifice much time that can otherwise be spent with family or friends. eg. Karl Marx

            3. Admittedly some people have strong interest in their professional field and learning knowledge is a treat for them, yet they inevitably have less time to spend with family or friends, an activity that is important to personal life.

谢啦谢啦～

rio

看我的签名贴或置顶贴

snowmary

嗯，我就是看了rio的汇总贴，然后发现我的理解和大家的理解都不一样，所以才发上来问问的。rio大N帮我看看吧

rio

其实你的前两点写得比较类似

你可以反着说，比如在不牺牲个人生活的情况下，又想做出大成就，是多么多么的难。

还可以从客观和主观两方面。

客观就是时间和精力

主观就可以说和尚道士什么的

snowmary

嗯，我也觉得1、2有点点重复

想请教一下，我马上考试了，现在主要是看看范文，边自己想提纲边看范文，希望能拓展自己的思路，免得到时候看到一个题目想不出来论据。但是自己动手写的不多。不知道像我这样的临考的是应该多看范文还是应该多练呢