[求助]請問這樣的寫法有問題嗎？請指正...謝謝~

itsmyways

請指正下方有畫線、粗體的部分，因為我有點不太確定...

謝謝～

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When confronted with various questions, different people make their own decisions due to their respective viewpoints. Analysis of these questions helps us improve the understanding of our basic needs and preferences. One of such controversial issues is whether we support that a large shopping center is built in our neighborhood or not. The choice is not easy to make. However, from my point of view, I will think supporting the building of the shopping center is more advisable. Among numerous factors which support  my arguments, I will discuss three conspicuous aspects of them as follows.

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Neighbors are the people who live near us, and their behavior deeply affects our daily life. Good neighbors can make us feel comfortable and give us much help when we get into some trouble. On the other hand, if we have bad neighbors, they would make our life irregular and even have us want to move out. Therefore, from my point of view, among numerous qualities of a good neighbor, I think there are at least three conspicuous aspects of them as follows.

guandream

以下是引用itsmyways在2004-11-4 9:35:00的发言：

請指正下方有畫線、粗體的部分，因為我有點不太確定...

謝謝～

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First:

When confronted with various questions, different people make their own decisions due to their respective viewpoints. Analysis of these questions helps us improve the understanding of our basic needs and preferences. One of such controversial issues is whether we support that a large shopping center is built in our neighborhood or not. (there is nothing wrong with the grammar, but the structure is really awkward)The choice is not easy to make. However, from my point of view, I will think supporting the building of the shopping center is more advisable. Among numerous factors which support  my arguments, I will discuss three conspicuous aspects of them as follows.

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Second:

Neighbors are the people who live near us, and their behavior deeply affects our daily life. Good neighbors can make us feel comfortable and give us much help when we get into some trouble. On the other hand, if we have bad neighbors, they would make our life irregular and even have us want to move out. Therefore, from my point of view, among numerous qualities of a good neighbor, I think there are at least three conspicuous aspects of them as follows.

itsmyways

Thanks for your advice. I also feel strange... ^_^...

May I rewirte the sentence as "One of such controverisal issues is that do you support or oppose a large shopping built( the omission of "which is built" ) in our neighborhood? " ?

That will make the sentence become a question sentence. Is it okay or ridiculous?

Another question:

Among numerous factors which support  my arguments, I will discuss(may I use "propose"(提出) ) three conspicuous aspects as follows.

Thanks for your suggestion in advance.

pengstone

以下是引用itsmyways在2004-11-4 13:17:00的发言：

Thanks for your advice. I also feel strange... ^_^...

May I rewirte the sentence as "One of such controverisal issues is that do you support or oppose a large shopping built( the omission of "which is built" ) in our neighborhood? " ?

That will make the sentence become a question sentence. Is it okay or ridiculous?

看得有些别扭，不如直接一点：one of such controverial issues is whether we should support to built a large shopping center in our neighborhood.

Another question:

Among numerous factors which support  my arguments, I will discuss(may I use "propose"(提出) ) three conspicuous aspects as follows.

Thanks for your suggestion in advance.

应该是可以的

itsmyways

Thanks，不過有點疑問再請問：

我查了一下，support是及物Verb，用support to可以嗎？我在寫的時候，只有覺得接clause比較順...直接接Verb就怪怪的...

另外我覺得加上oppose好像比較符合段落意義，有選擇性的意味吧，應該沒有問題吧？

謝謝指導了！再次感謝！

看得有些别扭，不如直接一点：one of such controverial issues is whether we should support or oppose to build a large shopping center in our neighborhood.

guandream

"whether" already implies two alternatives, so you donot need or oppose. support to build:" to build "is infinitive as an objecitve.

itsmyways

Thanks~ I got it~

Forgive me for asking a new question:

Is the sentence below right? Or I should use "It is an interesting quesiton that....".

I am not so sure. I want your suggestion to reinforce my confidence.

Thanks a lot~~~ Both guandream and pengstone are kind persons.

This is an interesting question that among all methods of learning, which is best for we?

pengstone

both are ok, but i prefer "it"