请大牛帮忙改作文啊

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语法错误应该已经没有了，但是写的有点弱智，多包涵……（附件里是一样的）

Agree/disagree：
                Letting a friends make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy the friendship.

 

When facing the choice between let a friend make a mistake and saying or doing something that may destroy the friendship. Different people have different preferences due to their distinct backgrounds and experiences. Let a friends make a mistake will be widely accepted because people do not want to destroy their friendship, on the other hand， Some think saying or doing something is a better choice .As far as I am concerned we should saying or doing something when our friends make mistake. I will try to prove my point by the following ideas.

 

First, saying or doing something when our friends make a mistake is our duty. If a person makes a mistake, he/she would probably get in trouble. As a responsible person, to help our friends when they are in trouble is necessary. Some mistakes affect a lot, and it may cause really serious problem. Once one of my friends borrowed my homework. I wanted to but did not prevent him. Finally, our teacher found it and called his parents. I was repentant of it for really a long time. Although did not let him took my homework may destroy our relationship, it was better than let him make this mistake. For this reason, we should point out our friends' mistakes.

 

In addition, let a friend make a mistake may destroy the friendship, too. Sometimes a person makes a mistake but does not know what he/she was wrong. After they know it, they maybe angry or disappoint because their friends did not tell them. A friend is not only a person to play with but also a person to give advice or helps. Most of people would like to have a helpful adviser rather than a playmate. We can even play with a dog or a cat, but they cannot give us any advice or help. A friends we can only play with maybe less useful than a loyal pet. If a person's friends think he/ she is not necessary and less important how their friendship could keep well. Saying or doing something would make their relationship better.

 

Furthermore, do not saying or doing something when one of one's friends make a mistake would destroy the friendship with others. When a person makes a mistake many people would found it. If this people is your friends but you do not do anything, other people may thinks that you are not a good friend or you do not no it is wrong. If a meet a choice between hurt the relationship with one people or a lot of people, my choice is easy to know. Compared with hurt many people's feeling and destroy the friendship, most of people is more important.

 

That is true that sometimes to prevent a friends before he/she make a mistake is effect a lot. People would be unhappy if their friends told them they should not do something. This effect may break the relationship sometimes. That is a really serious effect, no one want to lose a friends just due to a little mistake. Every friend is vital for us, though they make mistakes sometime.

 

Although we don not want lose any friends, we should saying or doing something when a friend make a mistake. This is our duty. If we do not we would hurt others feeling or also destroy the friendship.