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作文题：TWE 7 how do movies and television influence people's behavior? use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

                                          How movie and television affect people behavior

      Currently, movie and television have developed dramatically as the relevant science and technology become more and more sophisticated. Everyday we may spend an hour or two in front of a Television set and just watch TV without saying a word. As the movies and television have permeated in our daily lift, they do influent us to a large degree.  As far as I am concerned, the impact of the movie and television varies from person to person. It depends on what you gain from the movie and television and how it influents on your lift.

     For most human being, the major means that movie and television affects them is that movie and television provide a convenient way for them to learn more about the outside world. As we know, movie and television present us with different culture and custom in various countries by videos and films. Via watching television, we are exposed to numerous places of interest and custom even though we have not yet been to them. Besides that, documentaries spread science and social knowledge as well. No matter adults or children can benefit a lot from movies and television shows.

     What is more, movies and television are sorts of arts. To some extent, movies and television shape our understanding of what is aesthetic and what is unaesthetic and cultivate our sense of arts. So often are we moved by films about love, between boys and girls, parents and children, or friends and so forth. Consequently, seeing films and watching television have become a significant part of our psychological world.

    However, wonderful as movie and television, they also have bad effect on us. Not all the movies and television are suitable for all individuals, especially children. Some movies and televisions content violence and eroticism, which do harm to children and people with sensitive nerve. One may shiver fiercely and be of great dread after seeing a horrible film. What makes thing worse is that the films and television directors are likely to add more violence and eroticism for higher profit and audience rating.

     In conclusion, the influence of movies and television is complex. It depends on what you attain from what you watch and how you respond to what you watch. In light of violent and erotic movies and television are detrimental, we should carefully choose films and television.  

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